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TITLE: Silver Aura

AUTHOR: trixchia

REVIEWER: PancakeJune

Title: 5/5
Your title is very unique, and I usually like to cross reference titles to check. It captures readers easily, and you don't have to worry about confusion between stories. I've read many stories that had similar titles to each other, and I ended up confusing them all with each other, so it was refreshing to see a difference.

Graphic/Poster: 3/5
Both posters are good, I quite like the silver hues of the second one because it fits well with the whole concept of  'silver aura'. The first one is just as good; I quite like how the characters are positioned and whatnot. I would like to say that you get some sort of background since many people like that kind of thing, I prefer the actual story to the graphics, but a lot of people do pay attention to the graphics. It just makes your story look prettier.

Foreword/Description: 13/15
I like both your foreword and description. The description gives an idea of what the main character will be like, and the quote at the beginning really drew me in. Concerning the foreword, I do think it was kind of you to mention the fact that your story is loosely based off of the 'Hunters of Artemis' as you've cleared any potential plagiarism issues that a person may want to hold against you. It is unlikely that it would happen, but you could never be too careful. I also like how you give the readers a brief background on 'Silver aura' and people who harbour it because it tells the reader what your main character is like.

Characterization: 8/10
I really like your main character- she's really interesting and enthralling. She thinks that she knows ever