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 Title: Louder Than Words

Author: BloodyRavens

Main Characters: Seo Inguk, Hwang Aerin (OC), Kang Minhyuk (CNBlue), Kim Yoonhye.

Status: Chaptered / Completed.

Synopsis/Description: Everyone has scars. For some, those scars run deeper than others. Hwang Aerin grew up bullied by her peers. After an incident in high school she stopped speaking. Seo Inguk was a man who had everything; a good job plus a loving wife and son. However his world was turned upside down when his wife and son died in a tragic accident. Aerin lived her life avoiding others, holed up in her studio painting all day. Inguk put on a smiling face every day, but in reality he was only a shell of his former self. They met when Inguk was assigned to be Aerin’s handler for a gallery. She was the frustratingly shy artist who made her brother do all of her deals for her and he was the pushy gallery curator who refused to let her have her way. As they discover each other’s wounds and learn who they really are, can they help the other overcome the pain left by their scars? This is the story of the voiceless and the pretender.

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 Reviewed by: Hamster08

 Date finished: 31 August 2014.

Title: 4/5

The title have a nice ring to the whole story but it sounds somehow predictable, like I already know what the plot's going to be. I'm not really sure if that's good or bad.

Graphic/Poster: 5/5

The graphics and themes on your chapters were really nice. I really like it! The poster could've been better but the designs were envious. I'm jealous. I must do those to my stories, too. XD

Foreword/ Description: 8/15

Links.. links.. photos, videos, notes. That's almost all there was in the description. I understand that this story is for a contest but you didn't have to give it that much space. There were too much unnecessary information on your foreword. And the summary you put up wasn't exactly a summary but just a brief description about the two main leads and a question. It didn't even arouse the curiosity in me