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cosmos

   welcome   to   cosmos   REVIEW SHOP. WE ARE

 

   

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about us

 

THIS SHOP WAS ESTABLISHED ON MAY 13 2014 BY

 

YODAYEOL. WE ONLY OFFER STORY REVIEW SERVICE. FOR

 

THE REVIEW REQUEST, WE'LL RANDOMLY ASK ANY

 

AVAILABLE REVIEWERS TO DO IT BUT IF YOU WANT ANY

 

SPECIFIC REVIEWER TO REVIEW YOUR STORY DO TELL US.

 

WE WILL TRY OUR BEST TO COMPLETE YOUR REQUEST.

 

 

REMINDER, FILL IN THE REQUEST FORM CAREFULLY, READ

 

THE SHOP RULES AND CHECKS THE SHOP STATUS BEFORE

 

REQUESTING/APPLYING. THANK YOU.  

 

 
 

rules and guidelines

001 //  SUBSCRIBE AND UPVOTE THIS SHOP WHEN REQUESTING AND STAY SUBSCRIBED AS LONG

 

AS YOUR REVIEW IS STILL UP. YES, UPVOTING IS A MUST STARTING THIS BATCH. KARMA POINTS

 

GAINED FROM YOUR UPVOTE WILL BE USED AS A PAYMENT TO OUR REVIEWERS. READ CHAPTER

 

ONE FOR MORE EXPLANATIONS.

 

 


002 // WE ACCEPT ALL KIND OF FANFICS (RATED M, YURI, , STRAIGHT, BROMANCE,

 

FRIENDSHIP, ONE-SHOT, CHAPTERED, COMPLETED, ON-GOING ETC.)
 


003 // COMMENT AFTER SUBMITTING YOUR REQUEST FORM/APPLY FORM, AND AFTER PICKING

 

UP YOUR REVIEW.

 

004 // DO NOT BASH THE REVIEWER IF YOU DON’T LIKE THE REVIEW. YOU CAN ALWAYS SHARE

 

YOUR THOUGHT AND OPINION, BUT DON’T BE RUDE.


 

005 //nO RUSHING, PLEASE. SIMPLY pm the shop owner / co-owner / reviewer in

 

charge IF we're taking too long (more than two months) to finish your request.
 

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006 //  PLEASE FILL IN THE REQUEST FORM CAREFULLY AND INFORM US AS SOON AS POSSIBLE

 

IF YOU WANT TO CANCEL YOUR REQUEST.



007 // CREDIT THIS SHOP AND THE REVIEWER SOMEWHERE IN YOUR FOREWORD OR

 

DESCRIPTION, LINK BACK TO THE SHOP. IT’S OPTIONAL TO USE OUR SHOP BANNER WHEN

 

CREDITING. but, crediting itself is a must.

 


008 // YOU ARE GIVEN A WEEK TO CREDIT THIS SHOP AND THE REVIEWER. WE WILL BE

 

CHECKING. FAILED TO DO SO, EXPECT YOUR USERNAME IN OUR BLACKLIST. SERIOUSLY, JUST

 

DON’T REQUEST HERE IF YOU HAVE NO THOUGHT TO PICK UP THE FINISHED PRODUCT AND

 

CREDITING US.

 


010 // ALL COMPLETED REQUESTS WILL BE TRANSFERED TO OUR REVIEW ARCHIVE. once we

 

completed your request, your story will be added to our hall of fame (yes, all

 

request). this feature only valid if you provide a poster link in your request form.

 

so, no poster link no feature.  Just consider this as a free advertisement for your

 

story. however,  please let us know if you want us to take down your story from

 

our hall of fame  section.



011 // PLEASE CHECK CHAPTER 1 TO FILL IN THE REQUEST/APPLY FORM.

 

THE PASSWORD IS FANTASIA.

 

 

 
 
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eunh0o #1
Chapter 3: hello, i was wondering if you're still accepting reviewers! if so, i would like to apply to be one! I've had a bit of experience beta-reading my friends' essay and also i'm a writer myself! i just wanted to try out something new and would be very glad to offer my services to your team! thank you, hope you'll give me a response!
pandatypewriter #2
Chapter 26: Thank you so much for the review! Thank you hocbaidi! It was very insightful and has given me a good guide to how I should write my future stories! Thank you so much and I will credit today!
girly_author-nim457 #3
Chapter 24: Thanks for the review! It's really helpful because I always feel like my writing can get better so thank you so much for the helpful advise, changes will be made! I credited/picked up the review ^^
*** Special thank you to strawberryhyun_ for taking your time especially since you had midterms (hope you did well and the delay was no problem)
Moony_Kat #4
Chapter 23: Hi there! Thank you for your review! I really appreciate the feedback although maybe I was expecting a bit more of it on the characters at least, but I do understand that you have other stories to read and review, so still, I am contented with your review. Thank you again!
I picked up and credited :)
Tripping-Panda #5
Chapter 22: First of all thank you so much to the review shop to give us an opportunity to get our stories reviewed and then thank you so so much to sekaimi who've spent their precious time on reading and reviewing my story STRANDED.
The review gave me such a great insight on what I can do to improve my writing, and also a good confidence boost. Which you sometimes need and I feel really inspired to keep writing after this review. You have many good points! I am going to redo the description to fix the mistakes and I went through my story to fix the few grammar mistakes you pointed out! I go through my own stories and when you've read and written something many times you easily miss the mistakes, so thank you for helping me with that!
About the characters, thank you for noticing that! I'm actually happy that you're not familiar with NCT, because then you can focus on the characters of the story and not just them as a group. I did focus on creating the characters with more depth and also be a little realistic with the development of their relationships.
You're right about the dialogue, maybe I've become used to see that when I read and just adapted to it, I'll try to experiment with my writing and avoid doing that.
I really love having multiple characters, but it's hard, I try to do it with balance and I am happy to hear that it worked out in the end!!
I know the ending is terrible, you should've seen me writing it, took me so long to actually convince myself this was the way it was gonna go down.
I appreciate the detail of your reactions to each chapter!
Your review was excellent! Really nice job of presenting it both very informative and inspiring. Good balance of compliments and constructive critism, which is perfect. Good luck with your other reviews! Thank you again! <3
I have credited the review shop and sekaimi !! <3
ExoDoll #6
Chapter 21: I have credited the reviewer and the shop!
ExoDoll #7
Chapter 21: Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and giving me feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I understand about the whole proof reading thing. I need to get a beta reader soon for my grammar as most of the chapters are messily written in train/trams/buses or small lunch brakes and I don't really have time to go through the chapters after writing them. Thank you once again for your time and effort.
I will make sure to credit the shop and the reviewer in the story :)
Moony_Kat #8
Chapter 20: Hi there^^ Thank you very much for the detailed review, I wasn't expecting it, but it's really helpful! I do tend to only proof read once before posting it, so I know that I have a lot of mistakes, which is great that you pointed them out :) I do feel you that the plot feels a bit rushed, but that was the entire point behind it: to give only moments in time and leave the reader wondering what exactly happened in between. It's a new style I tried... got to admit that this was meant to be a full story, but I decided against it because I have too much on my plate right now, so that might be another reason why the plot feels a bit rushed^^' Anyway, I really do appreciate your insight and hope you've enjoyed it!
I put up the credit and will correct the mistakes you've pointed out! Thank you again <3
kamski #9
Chapter 17: Hello! I am here to pick up my review! Thank you so much for your insight, I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I was worried about the pacing and the character portrayals, so you've really put my mind at ease ^^
Thank you so much for your review, I've picked up and credited!
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