Learning How To Love
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Title (4/5)
The title is not catchy enough, but after reading I notice why you put that title. It has a lot to do with the storyline, and even though I only read five chapters I can see where it was going.
Graphics (0/5)
Well, there is no poster so I have to give you the lowest score.
Description and Foreword: (9/10)
I really like the description since it made me really curious about your story or maybe I’m the one obsessed with these types of story, I don’t know. But I think it’s a pretty good start, you put the necessary information for me to know of what we’re going to found in your story. Besides, I love that you've put that Luhan’s note, it was pretty funny, and when I read it I just knew it was going to be a good story.I really like the description since it made me really curious about your story or maybe I’m the one obsessed with these types of story, I don’t know. But I think it’s a pretty good start, you put the necessary information for me to know of what we’re going to found in your story. Besides, I love that you've put that Luhan’s note, it was pretty funny, and when I read it I just knew it was going to be a good story.
Story Layout: (0/5)
There is no layout, no poster, no background, so it’s kind of blank and boring. I think you should really fix that, since those elements give life to the page, you know. The layout should be appealing and related to the storyline of course. I would like to see a cute Sehun with cat ears and a grumpy Kai on a poster, it would be so much better!
Plot: (15/30)
Okay. The catboy category is not that common, but I’ve definitely read stories with the same storyline. Wait, now that I remember, yes, it is a little bit common, but even so, your story seems more compromising and I’m still waiting for the by the way. However I really like your story and I love the characters as well. Yet I think it’s pretty predictable, I mean based on the title and on what I’ve read I know what is going to happen next.
Characterization: (8.5/10)
I love that each character has its own personality, they differ very clearly from one another .They are not plain either and I love that. I have to admit that Kai pissed me off a lot of times, but I still love him. My favorite character so far is Sehun because I have a feel that he’s going to change in the future chapters, since he’s too innocent and such. I didn’t give you the full score because I need to see how they evolve first of course, since the characters need to be dynamic.
Content Description (7/10)
I noticed that you're too focused on the characters, I mean your descriptions are solely based on your characters and that’s good to some extent. You didn’t t describe places and I think you should do it from now on, because it gives quality to the writing. Oh and since you are planning to do some , remember that the details are very important, a lot of details actually. In that kind of scenes you need to describe every action in detail, like this it’s going to be more enjoyable.
Flow: (5/5)
I think the flow is pretty good and natural so far. Every chapter makes me want to read more and more, good job with that. The story is not too low and not too fast either, the rhythm of the events it’s perfect to be honest. Since chapter one you got me and that’s very important. We have just to wait how the story is going to progress.
Grammar: (10/10)
Your grammar is excellent! I don’t how you do it! Like seriously, I didn’t catch any error. So I can’t say much about this point, just one thing, good job and beautiful grammar author nim!!!
Taste of the Story: (9/10)
I don’t know how many times I’ve said that, but I must say it again, I love your story. It’s entertaining and very well written. I absolutely love your writing style and the storyline is cute and compromising. Every chapter is great and it make me want to keep reading. But I would like to read more about the surroundings and stuff. I love your story and I’m waiting for more updates, good luck!
TOTAL: (67.5/100)
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