The IT Hunter
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Title (5/5)
I think me and you both knew this was going to get a 5/5, it is like the best title ever! I was seriously compelled to read this because of it!
I actually wanted to read this before I had to review it but with all my asianfanfics work, writing my stories, and reading other fanfics I had to put it on the backburner.
When I found out I had to review it, I got so excited! The title gave me all that excitement. You should get a reward or something!
I actually wanted to read this before I had to review it but with all my asianfanfics work, writing my stories, and reading other fanfics I had to put it on the backburner.
When I found out I had to review it, I got so excited! The title gave me all that excitement. You should get a reward or something!
Graphics (3/5)
As awesome as the poster is, there is no background nor is the foreword/description decorated. You should add these things just to give the story more appeal.
It just feels like it’s missing something. You have that amazing poster then everything else is so bland, even if you just make the background black, it would help a lot.
It just feels like it’s missing something. You have that amazing poster then everything else is so bland, even if you just make the background black, it would help a lot.
Description and Foreword: (10/10)
Please teach me o’ wise one! You’re description and foreword just pull the reader in, how do you do it?! SORCERY! No matter how hard I try, I can never get my description/foreword right!
You added some extra points with that trailer! I hated you the moment I heard Paramore start playing, I’m a er for anything that has to do with them. Plus, you chose one of my most favorite songs!
Ok, but now on to the actual trailer itself, I felt like I was watching a movie clip. Whoever made your trailer is so amazing! I really wanted to read the story once I watched the trailer . . . twice.
You added some extra points with that trailer! I hated you the moment I heard Paramore start playing, I’m a er for anything that has to do with them. Plus, you chose one of my most favorite songs!
Ok, but now on to the actual trailer itself, I felt like I was watching a movie clip. Whoever made your trailer is so amazing! I really wanted to read the story once I watched the trailer . . . twice.
Story Layout: (4/5)
The layout was good, bravo!
I’m usually much more mean when giving reviews, I swear you’re a witch good writer!
I’m usually much more mean when giving reviews, I swear you’re a witch good writer!
Plot: (25/30)
The plot was priceless. Top notch, you didn’t fail my expectations, I thought it was going to be good and it was great! Everything was perfect, how you explained the different monsters, why she was a hunter, and how she got to hunting ‘IT.’
Characterization: (8/10)
Once again, great job! You gave each character personality. That’s saying a lot when you have ocs and all of EXO! I could totally connect with each character and imagine them perfectly; you are very good at writing detail.
Content Description (8/10)
You explained everything well, the setting, characters, and back stories. I could imagine the whole story like it was a movie.
Flow: (4/5)
I didn’t have to stop and re-read things. It was a smooth read where I could just relax and read, not having to correct everything I see!
I didn’t have to stop and re-read things. It was a smooth read where I could just relax and read, not having to correct everything I see!
Grammar: (10/10)
Your grammar was awesome! It was really perfect if you knew the things I’ve had to review so far!
Like I said before it was a nice break not having to say, that’s wrong, rewrite, do you even know English?!
You need to help me with my grammar and I’m the reviewer! Great job! I can tell you’re very smart!
Your grammar was awesome! It was really perfect if you knew the things I’ve had to review so far!
Like I said before it was a nice break not having to say, that’s wrong, rewrite, do you even know English?!
You need to help me with my grammar and I’m the reviewer! Great job! I can tell you’re very smart!
Taste of the Story: (10/10)
Your writing is almost flawless; I’ll be finishing the rest of the story and putting my other one on hold. I think your story should be much more popular, with all this garbage that people are reading lately. Anyways, I am having a great read! Keep up the great work; you have a future ahead of you! Hwaiting!
P.S I’ve decided you are a witch, this is the nicest review I have ever given. Also, the shortest since there really wasn’t anything to point out.
Your writing is almost flawless; I’ll be finishing the rest of the story and putting my other one on hold. I think your story should be much more popular, with all this garbage that people are reading lately. Anyways, I am having a great read! Keep up the great work; you have a future ahead of you! Hwaiting!
P.S I’ve decided you are a witch, this is the nicest review I have ever given. Also, the shortest since there really wasn’t anything to point out.
TOTAL: (87/100)
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