Integrity & Borders
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Putting your story's feedbacks on the foreword had a really great advantage, especially when you had so many good feedbacks from the reviewers. It helps unsure readers to keep away from clicking the back button.
Honestly, I really like how you made everything in black and white! It was really classy and fit the business theme.
You have really wide knowledge about business, I've never read something as detailed as this before. I am going to major in business enterpreneurship, but I knew nothing until I read your story. Lol.
The whole conflict was so intensed that I found myself getting excited for no reason. I like how you integrate the drama, romance and business matters all into one. Your story is somewhat rare, you know, there aren't a lot of stories which have strong business genre.This proves that your story is just not an ordinary story with business mixed with pleasure and all that cliché hate-turn-to-love plot. What I like the most about your story is that you didn't only write about the story but you also gave some business lessons INDIRECTLY. You or the readers might not realize that but for me, those are a real hard slap on my face.
Another thing that you've nailed is the plot twist and the cliffhanger on the epilogue! I totally didn't expect any of this, but hey, expect the unexpected they say.
The scenes and settings that I interpreted were very vivid, I had no trouble depicting them in my head. The vocabulary wasn't that hard to understand either. Good job!
The flow was perfect, you took everything step by step and didn't rush things. This made me read your story without complaining at all. Except for, "Yah, mwo-ya igeo", "what?! No!" , "ugh this bastard" XD
Okay, I'm actually a grammar nazi aaaaaaand I didn't find any mistakes. There was a slight false spelling though. I think it's 'alright' instead of 'all right'. Correct me if I am wrong.
Everything is really good and honestly, I am really lost of words for what to say. You know that feeling when a story is too good and you can't express it with words anymore? Well I'm feeling it right now. Two thumbs up for you author-nim!!! :)
I'm sorry if this review is rather short because I really don't know what to say anymore. :(
TOTAL: (95/100)
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