Then there's the part when Reina got kidnapped and almost died. It was a total plot twist, I didn't expect it to come. And I really thought she really lost her child. I don't know, but your ideas were all really creative! Where did ya get that?

Oh not to mention I love the chanbaek couple in there! Man, they were so sweet! The rated scenes were hot omg. 

Characterization: (10/10)
You characterized them really well. Everyone's personalities and characters matched with how you wrote them in the first place. Except for Reina. You characterized Reina as fun-loving and yes, she was exactly like that, but I didn't expect her to turn out so y, annoying and...boastful? (I don't like her actually.)

Content Description (7/10)
I had trouble interpreting the settings. It was hard for me to stay in the same setting because I felt like your story was too western. The settings I portrayed were not in Korea or somewhere else in Asia, but somewhere in the west part of the world, even though it was stated Reina was raised in the states and then moved to Seoul. I couldn't even picture Nana as Reina. Reina always came out as an American lady instead of a Korean one in my mind. Same goes to the rest of the girls. Maybe it was because of the way the girls talked or gossiped, pretty much the same as if they were in a soap opera. If your story were to film as a drama, it definitely doesn't fit as a Korean one, instead, it fits as the one in Star World. I'm complaining or anything, I'm just saying that it's very rare.

Flow: (2/5)
Everything happened so fast. Like, how is it possible for Reina to fall in love with Kris in a short amount of time? You didn't write anything to show how they developed their love for each other. You mostly wrote about parties and such, so it didn't give much feeling to the readers of their love. It was as if Reina only liked Kris because of his looks and ual desires. Not only Reina, but Yoona and Suzy too. Most stories that I have read were similar to this, but the authors did wrote the whole process of the characters' blooming love. 

The honeymoon thing, I think it was better if you mainly discussed about Reina and Kris not Yoona or Suzy because I mean, it was 'honeymoon', you should have focused on that instead of others. Reina and Kris are the mains, aren't they? I'm not saying that you couldn't write about both Yoona and Suzy's side stories, but it just wasn't important? You could write several special chapters about them both.

Grammar: (10/10)
I guess you're from the states? I didn't find any grammatical errors. The punctuation marks, too, were perfect. Not a single mistake was found. ;)

Taste of the Story: (7.5/10)
I honestly almost gave up on reading your story when I just reached the 16th chapter. It was pretty boring because most of it was only about party and party. But when I accidentally saw some of your comments written 'I thought Reina's children died', curiosity got over me and I couldn't help but to continue reading it until the end. I must say that I originally love the plot not the story, if only you could be more focused on what would have happened instead of unimportant things, I think your story could've turned out really great.

Keep writing and fighting! :D