Beautiful Boy Review
Forbidden Dreamers Review Gallery
Title (3/5) → A bit plain but it still sparks up a little curiousity.
Foreword/ Description (0/10) → There wasn't a description of the story or a foreword. Descriptions helps make readers WANT to read the story. A foreword is a preview of the story. Please go add one.
Appearance (2/5) → The poster is unattractive. You might want to get one made by a poster shop.
plot (10/15) → Since it was a one shot I will give it a high score. I think the plot could've been stronger.
Originality (5/15)→ A twist at the end would have been better. Like an alternative ending.
Grammar & Spelling (20/20)→ I will give you full point here.
Flow (10/10)→ The flow of the story went well.
Characterization (8/10)→ The characterization was good but maybe a clearer image of explaination for each character would helped.
Overall Enjoyment (5/10)→ It was alright. Work on it more often.
63/100!
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