Orphan To Vampire Prince Review
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Title (4/5) → Interesting for your story. I think you could've made it even more of "yours."
Foreword/ Description (5/10) → I give you full credit for your description because it's interesting. No credit for foreword since it's not related to the story. Forewords are sort of a preview to the story. If you want to thank someone, simply put "author's note" on the bottom after your foreword.
Appearance (3/5) → The trailers made your story stood out and more interesting to readers. The poster is a bit messy and the story could be layout better.
plot (15/15) → Love it.
Originality (14/15)→ Would have gotten full credit except the color changing eyes. Many stories about supernaturals have that. Make it different! Instead of color changing eyes, maybe color changing hair or aura. Also, shouldn't your story be under Rated M. scene!
Grammar & Spelling (18/20)→ "and...love" between ... and love, make a space. (chapter one) "Once I get away" Donghae bluntly said. It should be written like "Once I get away," Donghae bluntly said. (Chapter one) There are minor mistakes.
Flow (7/10)→ You had me through out the story until around chapter 40-50? Then you suddenly seem off track with the writing. In the end, you completely lost my interest.
Characterization (8/10)→ Could use some more explaining and details with each character. Try using a character chart. (You can find those in any poster/graphic request shops)
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)→ I would love to continue reading this story as long as it doesn't get on my nerve again ^. ^ Sometimes you lose my interest and I read this story in one day. Try to fix up minor mistakes and don't get off track. I subscribed and upvote to prove my support to an Eunhae fanfic.
84/100!
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