Nine Tails, One Heart
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Review Request!
Title (5/5) → When I saw the title, I was like this might be really interesting.
Foreword/ Description (10/10) → The foreword totally pulled me into the story. It was just sooo cute.
Appearance (4/5) → Fix the layout! I love the poster but the background would be better if it was a solid color to match your poster.
plot (15/15) → Love it.
Originality (14/15)→ Make sure you disable the text selecting, people can easily copy & paste your story. I think that I have been reading too many super naturals these days. Tag: supernatural
Grammar & Spelling (20/20)→ I will give you full point here.
Flow (10/10)→ The flow of the story went well.
Characterization (8/10)→ Could use some more explaining and details with each character. Try using a character chart. (You can find those in any poster/graphic request shops)
Overall Enjoyment (3/10)→ Since chapter 1, I was like: Let's just get this over with. zzzz. It didn't capture my eyes & heart.
89/100!
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