My Prince is Cinderella Review
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Title (5/5)
Cute and appropriate, I like the fairy tale reference.
Foreward/Description (8/10)
Simple and straight-forward
Appearance (3/5)
Poster is lovely but to me it does not bring out the meaning of the story; you might want to somehow outcast Luhan to show the status difference between the 3 of them; he is after-all unforunately a 3rd party in this story.
Plot (10/15)
that I am doing this review where there is a cliffhanger haha.
So far the story is quite good but I feel that there can be more emotional build-up for the characters. I am wondering if you would like to do a couple of chapters in Xiumin's or Luhan's POV.
Storyline is nice and I think there is a lot of potential for story development and even plot twists; exciting!
Originality (12/15)
Nothing too out of the ordinary but special nonetheless.
Grammer & Spelling (17/20)
Nothing major but there are a couple of phrasing and sentence structure mistakes.
Flow (7/10)
Currently a bit slow and you need to portray the focus of each chapter more strongly (ie the title)
Characterization (6/10)
As mentioned, maybe other POV might be nice. Now we know how Luhan feels and all but it does not feel like reading it as a third POV whilst focusing on Hyun Mi's POV. Hope you understand what I mean.
Overall Enjoyment (8/10)
Not a bad read definitely; and the possibiilties at current standing is infinite.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
76/100!
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