Beautiful Boy
Forbidden Dreamers Review GalleryStory Title: Beautiful Boy
Title (4/5) → The title is really cute considering he's a boy. :P
Foreword/ Description (9/10) → I love how you give support to the people with anorexia. Actually I give you my support!! Hwaiting!
Appearance (4/5) → The poster is beautiful. It's kinda sad and mysterious combined!
Plot (14/15) → The plot was pretty interesting. I love how you put all emotions into just one chapter. And I just cried on the story. :D
Originality (14/15)→ It was the first time that I have read a story about people with anorexia, so I would say it is original!
Grammar & Spelling (20/20)→ I really don't find any mistakes in any of your sentences. I read it well and I have nothing to correct.
Flow (9/10)→ I love the flow of your story!! *tears of joy*
Characterization (9/10)→ The characters really appealed to me specially Sehun.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)→ I would recommend this to readers that would love drama and romance!!!
Reviewed by: MickoEri
93/100!
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