A Test of Fate
Forbidden Dreamers Review GalleryTittle (4/5): I like it. Period. I felt curious on what and how fate tested them. Good job on that.
Foreword/Description (9/10): I like how you brought the suspense on the foreword. It's like, you wanted the readers to become more curious to read the story carefully.
Appearance (4/5): I like the poster. Mysterious and suspense style, bringing more readers to read the story. But I think I don't like the background because it's making the story look like a horror story. In chapter two, I liked the poster, and Dara looked really somewhat a stubborn woman.
Plot (14/15): The plot was pretty interesting. It led me wondering each character's own ending.
Originality (15/15): I love the originality of your story. SPecially the ending, and I was REALLY not expecting that. It was beutiful.
Grammar and Spelling (18/20): Your grammars are really okay, although I found a few chapters with wrong spellings, but, I like it. In chapter two, when Dara said, "I was already late but I didn't even dare run", you kinda lack a word. It has to be "I was already late but I didn't even dare TO run." And that's all.
Flow (9/10): The flow was really beautiful and well.
Characterization (10/10): I like the characters specially how they differ from one attitude to another.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10): I LOVE THE STORY!!! From chapter one to the ending~!!! I really recomend this to the readers because it's cute, dramatic and comedic at the same time!
Reviewed by: MickoEri
93/100!
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