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Title (5/5)
Short, simple and direct, fitting of the story. No arguments here.
Foreward/Description (10/10)
As per the title, to the point and addresses in an ample way.
Appearance (4/5)
I do like it but it gives a slightly scary vibe as opposed to sadness. (I'm sorry it's a personal view)
Plot (10/15)
I am giving you a low score only because I think you have so much potential to go much further in this story. I do understand that this is a "short story" but a story 3 times in length will still justify it as a short story.
- The "letters"are so short they honestly feel like text messages
- There was no heartfelt emotions being strongly portrayed throughout.
- The main problem I have is the jump between in the knowing and not knowing. For a tragedy like this there can be different scenarios, Sehun living in denial and thinking Luhan is still around, Sehun knowing deep down inside that Luhan is dead and refuses to accept it and Sehun knowing it is but continues doing the regular because it feels right. You seem to have a mix on all 3 which confuses me quite a bit. An example which portrays each of the 3: 14 Feb, 26 Apr , and 20 Apr
I hope you understand my feedback :) With your writing skills, I am only disappointed they were not full-blown emotional more lengthy letters.
Originality (14/15)
It is a very nice storyline and idea but there wasn't really any twist/ so I will penalize you a bit here.
Grammer & Spelling (20/20)
Nothing to penalize here.
Flow (7/10)
I will cut the points here for the main reason mentioned above on the lack of length for a "letter".
Characterization (7/10)
Because of the confusion as mentioned above, Sehun's character and emotional development is a bit blurred.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
Beautiful read. I enjoyed it a lot.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
87/100!
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