Night of the Wallflower
Forbidden Dreamers Review GalleryTitle (4/5): Well, I did like the title even though I don't know what the ehck does a Wallflower means! (xD) It's cute and kinda mysterious.
Foreword/Description (8/10): It's short, but I think it just gave out information on what the story is all about.
Appearance (4/5): SImple, but what can I say? It's awesome, because it just add more mystery on what the story is going to be all about.
Plot (12/15): Actually, the plot was pretty interesting. And I can't say anythign bad at it.
Originality (13/15): I could say that the part where she was the wallflower in that party was kinda cliche, but it was wonderful how you'd make your own scene.
Grammar and Spelling (17/20): Well, the sentence, "Seeing she had no response on me." was kinda wrong. It has to be "Seeing she had no response FROM me." But aside from that, everything was perfectly fine.
Flow (8/10): The flow of the story is cute and nice.
Characterization (10/10): Your characters appealed to me, specially Ye Rin adn Tao. (<3)
Overall Enjoyment (10/10): I really enjoyed it, because the story is cute, although it was short, it's nice how you can make a story with a happy ending in just a few paragraphs.
Reviewed by: MickoEri
86/100!
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