On Time Review
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Title (3/5) → I am not sure which title it is. On time or it happens for a reason.
Foreword/ Description (5/10) → You don't have a foreword so no credit on that note. Description was interesting. It catches your attention especially on the last line. What truth is hidden in the dark? It makes you curious of what the truth she is trying to uncover.
Appearance (4/5) → I love the poster & the background. I see slight angst and the colors were an interesting choice. Though instead of purple another color would have done better. Purple seems a little dull.
plot (14/15) → The plot was good but the part one and part two threw me off a little.
Originality (10/15)→ This is quite like any romance story in a way. You could've twisted the ending of it.
Grammar & Spelling (20/20)→ I will give you full point here.
Flow (9/10)→ The flow of the story went well.
Characterization (8/10)→ The characterization was good but maybe a clearer image of explaination for each character would helped.
Overall Enjoyment (7/10)→ It was alright. I got bored at some point.
80/100!
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