My Angel, Oh Sehun Review
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Title (4/5)
I like it; it's appropriate and the word "angel" always gives a sweet fluffy feeling.
Foreward/Description (10/10)
Beautifully written. Goes very well with the content and main message of the story and also very poetic.
Appearance (4/5)
I love the poster because you made an effort to use a "spring" background but I would have chosen a more "angelic" picture of Sehun; him in a more simple outfit like a white tshirt/pullover.
Plot (14/15)
I think definitely a beautiful touching story no doubt about that. Just one small negative feedback from myself would be; "He can't remember how Sehun looks like?" It would seem like he would because he just looked at the broken photo frame.
Originality (13/15)
A well-written piece of angst but nothing too out of the blue in the fanfic world.
Grammer & Spelling (19/20)
Good english with a very flowery touch. However sometimes phrasing might turn out weird. Eg "His voice was soothing and his lisp could slightly be heard."
Flow (9/10)
Short story so not too much to content on flow, overall well done except the one pointer which I had previously mentioned on not recognizing Sehun.
Characterization (9/10)
Really nothing much to penalize on; little build-up of character's inner feelings, mostly centered around Luhan.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
Well written piece of work with a touching storyline. Your good writing succeeds in evoking emotions within readers so defintely full marks here. ;-)
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
92/100!
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