Train Ride To Heaven
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Title (3/5)
The title by itself feels like its Jongin's story; on his way to heaven. But here it is Chanyeol's story I would go along the lines of words like "freedom" instead.
Foreward/Description (5/10)
It didn't bring out the meaning of the story as much as I would have liked it to; not really as deep enough.
Appearance (4/5)
I like the background/colour theme and Chanyeol's expression.
Plot (13/15)
I love the storyline but I'm penalizing you here because despite reading your explanation the question still lingers "Why couldnt he have recognized Jongin?" Might have been a good idea to express that the person was all covered up maybe with a scarf leaving the eyes revealed. To Chanyeol when he peered into those familiar looking set of eyes; all he saw was warmth, different from the cold eyes of his ex and therefore knew it couldnt have been him etc.
Originality (15/15)
I don't think this is the first review of yours I'm doing and you always have very good and deep meaningful stories. I love them.
Grammer & Spelling (20/20)
Really nothing to penalize here, you have great language.
Flow (10/10)
Short and sweet. No abruptness within the story; you led the readers into Jongin's arrival nicely.
Characterization (10/10)
I understand the characters well; good job.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
Like I mentioned above, original deep meaningful and written beautifully.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
90/100!
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