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Title (4/5) → Personally I like one word titles. :D
Foreword/ Description (6/10) → The description was a letter which is nicely written. I like the foreword as well because you can feel Kri's regret and sorrow but I personally think you gave your whole story away already.
Appearance (3/5) → The poster was nice but the background did not matched. Your foreword & description got a changed of colors, fonts, and sizes.
plot (10/15) → It was a good plot but I sort of knew what would have happened. It's one of those kinds of stories.
Originality (10/15)→ The story was easily predictable.
Grammar & Spelling (20/20)→ I will give you full point here.
Flow (10/10)→ The flow of the story went well.
Characterization (8/10)→ The characterization was good but maybe a clearer image of explaination for each character would helped.
Overall Enjoyment (9/10)→ It was a short but yet amazing romance story. I liked it. Great to read for passing time.
80/100!
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