Title (5/5) → The title is pretty original and gives off a mysterious feelings since you don't know who this "therapist" really is.

Foreword/ Description (5/10) → There wasn't really a description so I took off points for that. I love the foreword because it really captured my attention. The part where the characters says "wondered why she thought that she could mend me when I was already broken beyond repair."

Appearance (4/5) → The poster is beautiful. There wasn't a background but that's okay. I think you should fix up your layout so that everything looks more organize.

plot (10/15) → The plot was really pretty well done because you explained in details.

Originality (13/15)→ I wasn't expecting to read what I just read. It touched my heart :) So good job.

Grammar & Spelling (10/20)→  In chapter two "I quirked an eyebrow up at her. It was the first time she had every spoken to me and it was the first time I had ever head the sound of her voice. It was soothing, something that I could listen to all day." The bold words are wrong, every should be ever and head should be heard.

In chapter three "Where they a solid? Something that you could touch and hold in your hand, something that obtains its shape, the particles tightly squeezed together making it unbreakable. Like bones, keeping you together and with out them you would crumble to the ground. Or where they liquids? Something that could run through you veins, feel it, but not hold on to it. Something that never really stayed with you for every long." The bold word with out should be together, changing it to without. You should be your.

Also in chapter three "But I could still tell that it was could outside, the biting type of cold that would nip at all the bare skin it could." The word is cold outside not could outside.

Also in chapter three "I glanced around at the people walking around, young children with their parents, couples holding hands, people waking their dogs or the odd jogger or two that came by us." The word you want to use is walking not waking.

Also in chapter three "I felt her smile grow wider." The word should be grew not grow. The tenses aren't right.

In chapter four "“Art needs no words. But that doesn’t mean that it has to go with out a sound.” She said as she resumed her painting." The word without is together. "Art needs no words, but that doesn’t mean that it has to go with out a sound." "Art needs no words, but that doesn’t mean it has to go with out a sound…"

In chapter five "I let my eyes graze over the work she had done, scanning for mistakes that I could help her correct." The word is glaze not graze.

In chapter five "“No,” I said scooting closer, placing my finger on the fault she had made “This diagram should look like this.” I stated, sketching out the way it should look." Instead of stated, you should use started and take out the comma.

I leaned my head back on the head rest, a deep sigh escaping my lips, letting Sooyoung’s bit of small, but interesting, information seep into the depths of my brain. It should be headrest not head rest

“Taeyeon? We’re here.” She said softly as I heard the unbuckling of her seatbelt. Seat belt is two separate words.

In chapter six...

“Pssssttt….Taengoo! Open up!” I heard a hushed whisper outside my door, followed by a few quiet and quick knocks. Whoever this person was, clearly didn’t want to be heard, too bad they were doing an extremely bad job." Don't over do the sound, here is the correct way: Psssst.

She was wearing a red baseball jacket that was a few sizes too big for her, a black under shirt, blue skinny jeans, topped off with a pair of converse. Undershirt is one word.

Oohh scary...” She said sarcastically. The correct way is: Ooh

“I promise, we wont even get caught. Plus we’ll have a great time.” Wont should be won't.

I only edit part of your story but you can now fix some of those mistakes up ^. ^.

Flow (7/10)→ The flow of the story went pretty well because even though it was lengthy, it still got my attention.

Characterization (4/10)→ You should describe the way the characters' looks or else if people didn't know who they really are.

Overall Enjoyment (7/10)→ I would recommend this to readers that don't mind spelling mistakes. I am glad I was able to edit your spelling mistakes since your story allowed text selections. I hope the feedback helped :)

65/100!