More Than Meets the Eye
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Title (4/5)
It's an alright title with direct relation to Chaerin I suppose but something more magical or adventurous might be more attention-grabbing.
Foreward/Description (10/10)
Short and simple, to the point and addresses story in an ample way.
Appearance (0/5)
No poster here so no points.
Plot (14/15)
It's an ok storyline but you managed to write it well for a short story. I could pick out the elements of suspense, action and supernatural.
There wasn't any or twists but there were several subtle hints dropped all through the story which made it interesting. It's just too little for me to give a lot of feedback on the storyline but really it was well written.
Originality (15/15)
You never run out of fresh ideas so always full marks here.
Grammer & Spelling (20/20)
Nothing to penalize here.
Flow (9/10)
Generally a good flow, no abruptness even in her transformation so I give you credit there.
Characterization (8/10)
Once again not too much content to work with but for this scene, the characters did come out so credit given.
Overall Enjoyment (9/10)
Nice and short read.
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
89/100!
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