Beautiful Wolf Review
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Title (5/5)
Perfect title for a story of its perfection.
Foreward/Description (10/10)
Your short, simple and captivating descriptions are always well done.
Appearance (4/5)
I couldn't quite understand the words on the poster; "watch him back..." and I reckon a more innocent and casual picture of Hyukjae could be chosen. But I have to give additional points for the beautifully created beautiful wolf Donghae.
Plot (14/15)
A fresh and interesting concept being introduced here; a differing take on the werewolf myth.
Just a couple of "questions" you might need to answer in the following chapters
-Since the whole species is new, we need to understand what is the factor that makes them transform between wolf and human (so far we can guess its the weather); how these species came about and whether they have any control over their transformation (especially since you brought in the young kids). Also I am not clear on the memories attained and kept in between the transformations. With your good desrciptive writing skills it might be interesting to do a physical write-up on one transformation as well.
-One thing I felt slightly lacking in the opening chapters was Hyukjae's growth and feelings towards the wolf within the 18 years because I get the fascination of a small kid but how they could be prolonged is a different matter.
-Also what Donghae thinks or feels about Hyukjae exactly; especially in his human form apart from just the comforting scent.
Originality (15/15)
Creating a new species is always interesting and challenging. You have definitely done well here.
Grammer & Spelling (20/20)
Nothing to penalize here.
Flow (9/10)
The chapters are slightly more lengthy mostly due to detailed descriptions.
But I definitely like how their relationship is developing.
Characterization (9/10)
As mentioned above, more insight into their personal development and emotions could be good.
Overall Enjoyment (10/10)
Capitvated me from the start. Hit the subscribe button so full marks here. All the best!
Reviewed by: eunhyuksgal
96/100!
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