Whiplash II

Downing Today, Drowning Tomorrow

themedicalscholar: I got my first comment today, from spartace_suki and that made me want to write more. So here's chapter 9, I hope you guys enjoy it. 

Lee Kwang Soo stared at nothing, his head was about to burst. What just happened? He asked himself and found himself unable to process what happened. His palms are getting sweaty, his heart is about to burst; what just happened? Wearily, he walked into the rooms; he went back communal room with Yoo Jae Suk He tried to walk as steadily and steathily as he could, making sure he's not going to wake up. 

'Kwang Soo?' The voice startled him, but he made sure not to get too jumpy about it. 

He cleared his throat. 'Yeah, hyung?' He says. 

'Where have you been?' Jae Suk the lights, wearing his glasses. 

'Outside, hyung, I couldn't sleep.' He says. That was his first intention, though. 

'Let's talk, Kwang Soo-ya.' Jae Suk has always been the one making all the jokes, but it seemed like he sounded serious this time. I think that tonight might not really be too good for his heart, since everything is just bothering him too much. He sat on his bed, waiting for what his hyung has to say. It's already 2AM, and it might be good for him to catch some sleep. 

'You met Ji Hyo, didn't you?' He says, catching Kwang Soo off guard. 

'Hyung, how did you know?' He tried to keep it on the down low. 

'Ji Hyo told me, she mentioned that you guys slept together.' 

'Why did she tell you, hyung?' Kwang Soo, dumbfounded from the news. 

He sighs. 'She was lost, and needed some guidance. I became her helping hand. But what you're into, Kwang Soo-ya, it's not good It's not good for your career, and also not good for yourself. If the producers find out, you're going to be in trouble when it comes to the show. As you already know, Song JI Hyo already has a loveline, and that's with Gary, not you.' 

'Why couldn't it be with me?' 

'Because people see you and her as something very casual, not something serious. What happened that night, Kwang Soo-ya, might have been just a flaw, and I don't want you to be too caught up with it.' Jae Suk tries to warn him. 

'Hyung..' Kwang Soo sighs, 'But I feel something for her, hyung, I care deeply for her, and these feelings make me want her in that way.' 

Jae Suk sighs, and turns off the lights. 'Then just be careful, if you want to like her, like her as if you're walking on thin ice. If you don't, you're the one who will feel the whiplash.' 

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kwangsooxkyungsoo #1
Chapter 19: I read it again after a year but the heartbreak still feels the same </3
MrsStar #2
Chapter 111: I just finished reading this, but I can’t really decide if I liked it or not. I guess the events leading to the ending (after Chapter 95) was/is not my cup of tea, it kind of made me upset in a way since I love KwangMong, that’s why. But other than that, I loved your writing. KwangMong has been my ship, so thank you for this story :)
regzlim
#3
Chapter 5: Another great chapter.

I like how Kwang Soo is very caring towards Ji Hyo.
I also liked the way he stumbled when Ji Hyo asked the innocent question, "Did you sleep okay?" It was kinda endearing.

Although at the end of the chapter, I ended up feeling a little sorry for Ji Hyo. Yes, she was partly to blame for encouraging Kwang Soo to drink, but she had to be the one comforting him.

I kinda felt both characters cared deeply about the other. With Ji Hyo fixing him breakfast and then comforting him and with Kwang Soo apologising even though it was not entirely his fault for what happened the night before. And I like that you had him behave timidly. It feels like you are setting us up that he cares very deeply for her. If not he wouldn't be so afraid of shaking the status quo.

I'm so looking forward to find out what happens to them! I've upvoted and subscribed. You have yourself a fan!
regzlim
#4
Chapter 4: I can't believe I never read this story before. I chanced upon your story while browsing the kwangmong tag and I'm sure glad I did. I think your your style of writing is very unique and I'm really kinda enjoying the short chapters.

Although I'm only four chapters in, I'm hooked and I can't wait to find out what happens next! Now off I go to read the rest of the story!
xxxcaixxx #5
Chapter 111: rất cám ơn bạn khi viết bài hát truyện về họ. I got tracking messages from the first and you hope that they will be together. Please again you than that the story of the current ship of my <3. You may be may in live and write them story
mushoo
#6
Hey, I have to admit I was a silent reader to this and was pleasantly surprised when you updated and completed it! I just love your style of writing, it really captured my attention to the point where I binge read the first 50 chapters then realised that it was unhealthy hahaha.
It was such a roller coaster for both Ji Hyo and Kwang Soo, I had always thought that their relationship was moving so fast that it would hurtle of the tracks. It was such a bitter sweet open ending which leaves me hoping for something more. Overall the whole story was so realistic which I found captivating, it showed not only highs of a relationship but also the lows.
So thanks for sharing this. I can't wait for you next idea. I look forward to reading it.
Anisart #7
Chapter 111: Thankyou thank you.... i really curious about your project next time.. cant wait