Almighty Key

A Fangirl's Dream

*Key’s POV*

“I’m really worried about Taemin and Carolyn,” I said, pacing around the kitchen.

“I’m sure Carolyn will be fine, and Taemin is okay; he knows what he’s doing,” Minho answered.

“But, what if something goes wrong and Carolyn is there longer and Taemin won’t eat or sleep… He’s gonna kill himself!”

“Hyung, don’t talk like that! They’re going to be just fine.” Minho came over and gave me a man hug and a tear slipped down my face.

*Minho’s POV*

I felt sorry for Key, but all this worrying was kind of bugging me. If it had been any of the rest of us in that hospital, he wouldn’t be nearly as concerned. But, ‘Oh my gosh! Our little maknae is going to get sick and hurt himself…’ Ugh!

“Hey! I have- oh um… I’ll leave you two alone?” the manager said awkwardly when he walked into the kitchen to see Key and I hugging.

“Aigoo, no! This is nothing but a bro hug!” I exclaimed, pulling away from Key immediately.

“Okay…” the manager looked at us skeptically before continuing. “I have some news for you. You’re having a photo shoot tomorrow in NYC.”

“Cool!” Key immediately perked up.

“But, the problem is, I don’t know how we’re going to peel Taemin away from Carolyn for the shoot.”

“Well why don’t we just shoot it without him?” I suggested.

Key shot me a glare and said, “There’s no way we’re doing a photo shoot without our precious little maknae. We’ll find a way.”

“But-,”

“I have the perfect plan!” Key cut me off. “I’ll go work my magic at the hospital. Put out an extra plate for Taemin tonight at dinner!” he called over his shoulder as he ran toward the front hall, slamming the front door behind him when he left.

The manager and I exchanged awkward, confused looks.

“So, that hug; are you guys-,”

“Please,” I stopped him, putting up a hand. “Don’t make me gag.”

*Key’s POV*

I hurried into the hospital and found Carolyn’s room as quickly as I could. I stopped right before I rounded the corner into the room to make sure I didn’t look like I’d run up three flights of stairs (because you know, I had). I thought it would be faster, but turns out I was very wrong.

I took a deep breath and entered the room. Taemin was sitting in a chair by Carolyn’s side. It had been five days since Carolyn had spoken for the first time. She was slowly getting better, but was sleeping right now.

“How is she?” I asked, walking over to Taemin and resting a hand on his shoulder.

“Oh! Hyung,” he jumped slightly. “You scared me. She’s much better. She ate some soup and bread today, and we had a nice conversation about-,”

“That’s great but I need you to come home for a day or two.”

“Hyung, I’m not leaving-,”

“We’re going to NYC for a photo shoot. We need you to come. I know you don’t want to leave, but think of Carolyn! You need all the paychecks you can get! Leaving her for these few days would only be helping her. Don’t you see?”

Taemin looked at me, then at Carolyn, then back to me. “I don’t want to leave her.”

“But Taemin! You’ll be helping her! This is something couples have to do. They support each other and can’t always be together in the process. It’s for her own good!”

“Go.” The groggy voice scared both of us. We turned see Carolyn whose eyes were open now.

“Carolyn,” Taemin said, taking her hand. “I’m not going to leave you.”

“Taemin, it’s okay. I’ll be here when you get back. I understand that we can’t always be together. It’s the price I have to pay for dating an idol. But it’s all right, because I’ll still be loving you. And seriously… it’s only like two days!”

 “I love you so much yebo. But are you sure-,”

“Yes Taemin; go.”

He smiled down at her and kissed her on the forehead. “I’ll be right back yebo.”

They said their goodbyes and I practically had to drag Taemin out of the hospital. But, I had succeeded in getting Taemin out of there. I really am the Almighty Key! 

 

 

*Ahh annyeong-haseyo my lovely readers! I can't believe we're on chapter 90 of the SHINee boys' journey! I hope you've been enjoying the ride but as you know, everything must come to an end. Thankfully we still have a little ways to go with this story! I've been writing ahead (like I usually do, otherwise there's no way I could update daily like I do, haha) and I feel sad because I'm kind of nearing the end. I'll miss my weekends of shutting myself away in my room like a hermit and writing from when I wake up at about noon to when I finally force myself to sleep, usually around 3 in the morning xD. Anyway, I'd just like to thank each reader, subscriber, and commenter and tell you guys that you mean the WORLD to me. By the way, I attempted at making a trailer for this story, but it didn't turn out so well. The trademark of the program I used decided to plant itself right in the middle of the video, my pictures didn't fade right and the video clips I had to work with were limited. Anyway, here's the link ----> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GW5zUaBFqB4&feature=channel .  If you still want to see it. We'll just call it my rough copy, seeing as this is the first video I've ever made and I kinda just figured everything out ont he program myself. Anyhoooooo, thank you so much again and

 

Stole that from my friend AmazingAegyo's blog post. Hopes she doesn't mind xD <3 By the way, if you're looking for a oneshot request shop, look no further than AmazingAegyo's business Dubu Mints Oneshot Request Shop! (I be ze co-author!) She is an amazingg author who will not disappoint! The link can be found heeeea! ---> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/146676/dubu-mints-oneshot-request-shop-kpop-oneshot-request-dubumints 

Aigoo, sorry guys. I'm overtired and feel like talking in funny accents >.< Anyways, saranghae<3 You are the beeeeesttttttt xD

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Just letting those of you who are wondering that YES there WILL be a sequal to this story^.^ I am in the process of writing it right now!

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EHhyung
#1
Really nice story and I really love it so much
sinebright1095 #2
I love it :)
writerinprogress94
#3
Chapter 6: Second review of the day! Let's do this! Chapters 3-6, woo! (And this is why I shouldn't have caffine...)
I don't think I caught any spelling or grammar errors in the last 4 chapters. There might have been a few places where the wrong punctuation sign was used, but other than that, 9.5/10 on grammar and spelling.
I feel like there wasn't as much description in the last four chapters, but there was definately more dialogue so it balanced out. 8.5/10 on word choice.
Your sentence structure was still a bit choppy in places, but your transitions were flawless. You moved very smoothly from one chapter or POV to another. 9/10 on sentence structure and transitions.
The characters are filling out very nicely! 9/10
Continuation value?
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... 80/100 :D
Now on to the next chapter!
writerinprogress94
#4
Chapter 2: seem a bit choppy. Maybe if they were combined...? Your transitions between ideas, paragraphs, and POVs were all "Sipjeom Manjeome Sipjeom!(10 out of 10)" Yay for 2PM reference :D
Dear lord, I've had to split this into 2 comments XP Me and my rambling...
Point #4~ Charcters! Any writer who's tried to write several OC's at once can appreciate the difficulty of having to give them each their own unique persona without making them a Mary-Sue. Even though by chapter two I've only seen your OC's a bit, they're all distinguishable from each other. I also think you're doing great on SHINee's POV's, too!
Final point~ Continuation value? (I believe I made up this phrase, but feel free to use it as long as you credit me XD)
In many longer stories, if by around the 5th to 10th I'm not enjoying it or interested for whatever reason, I'll stop reading. Your story, by chapter 2, is already at a 70/100 (which can drop or go up. I can already tell, though, that it'll be at least a 90/100 by the end!)
That's all until my next review! If these long reviews bother you, tell me and I'll shorten them :3
writerinprogress94
#5
Chapter 2: Even though the story is already completed, I'm still going to comment every few chapters. As an author I know how helpful feedback is!
First off, I don't think I caught any grammar or spelling mistakes in the last 2 chapters except for in Minho's POV in Chapter 1. You typed "Ewe, in a public restroom?" for Key's dialogue. "Ewe", spelled E-W-E, is a female sheep. Suggestions for the future or if you want to change it~ "Gross", "Nasty", "Disgusting", or simply "Ew"(sorry if I come across as a know-it-all, I don't try to XD). The only questionable thing is in the first sentence of Onew's POV in Chapter 2 you put "Her drooling words". Obviously I'm not all-knowing (who is, right?) so just because I don't know what that means doesn't mean it's wrong. Do you mean she's actually drooling? Could you clarify? I might want to use that word/phrase in the future, but I'd want to use it correctly! :3
Okay, now to the second point! Your word choice, which I mean by everything like your descriptions/imagery (like how the mansion was described during Key's POV in Captper 1; I don't know about you but writing the detailed descriptions is always the most tedious part of writing the story for me, so I applaud you! :D) to using words other than "said" for dialogue (one of my biggest fanfic pet peeves is when I find a story that has an amazing foreward, then I go to the first chapter and the whole thing is in "'Blah blah blah' said ___" format. Therefore, I really appreciate how you used things like *checks story quickly* "smiled"/"laughed"/"carried on"/etc.) That's really all I have to say on this point.
Point #3~ Sentence structure and segways/transitions between sentences and POVs! Over all in these first two chapters I'd give the sentence structure an 8.5/10. Some of the sentences just seemed a bit choppy. Like in Carolyn's POV in chapter 2 she says/thinks "Most people would've called it gay. I found it utterly attractive." The way they are now at the end of the paragraph they just
writerinprogress94
#6
I can't wait to read this! I listened to the piano cover while I read the opening and I swear I could actually see the whole thing! I can't wait to finish this story and head over to the sequel!
KhKheiselle0901 #7
Chapter 135: Welcome XD :D i just love this story..
EvrydayIsaShiningDay #8
Chapter 135: okay can i just say i was really confused when i saw that this was updates. xD same goes for the sequal. xD
danlyy
#9
That closure is so sad for minho...I suspect its Brianna who's become a black and red girl:/
CookieDookie #10
Ooh sequel :D
Can't wait ~