I'll See You Later

A Fangirl's Dream

*Carolyn’s POV*

We stood in the lobby of the airport, knowing what was to come. We had to go our separate ways to our own flights. We all shared a round of hugs, cheek-kisses and goodbyes before parting off to our flights with our boys at our sides. Vanessa and Nicole went off alone.

I was happy to see Vanessa go, though she didn’t leave before hugging Jonghyun with all her strength and saying “I’ll see you soon oppa! I’ll make sure to have the wedding all planned. Start thinking of what names we should give our six sons and eight daughters!”

Seeing Nicole walk off into the crowd all alone broke my heart. When we said our goodbyes I hugged her close, even though she didn’t hug me back. I told her I’d miss her and never forget her, even though she just stood there in silence. I knew she was hurting inside, but there was nothing I could do. My eyes followed her as she waddled off into the crowd, back to her old life.

“Let’s go. You don’t want to miss your flight,” Taemin said, wrapping an arm around my shoulders and escorting me through the airport. My bags had already been taken care of so all I had was a small carryon which Taemin carried for me. We stopped at the gate for my flight and just stared at each other.

“So, I guess this is it then,” he said, putting a hand to the side of my face.

“Yeah,” I smiled through my tear filled eyes. “I guess so.”

“Here,” he said, shoving something into my hand.

“Taemin, I can’t take your money!” I gasped, staring at the twenty dollar bill in my hand.

“It’s for when you get home. I want you to find an ice cream shop and eat one of our couple sundaes. You remember it right?” He tucked one of my red curls behind my ear and stared deeply into my eyes.

“Strawberry ice cream, hot fudge, and rainbow sprinkles,” I smiled as another tear slid down my face.

“Don’t forget the whipped cream on top,” he giggled, kissing me on the nose.

“Never,” I said through a waterfall of tears as we embraced in a passionate hug. “I’ll never forget Taemin.” I held onto his shirt with shaking hands, wishing I’d never have to let go.

“I love you,” he whispered, kissing my lips softly.

“I love you too Lee Taemin. Someday we’ll see each other again. When I’m out of high school,” I kissed him back.

“I know. I trust you. You find that webcam so we can talk, okay?” he told me once we pulled away.

“I will Taemin,” I nodded.

“Miss, I’m going to have to ask you to board the flight now,” the lady by the gate told me.

I pulled away from my boyfriend and walked toward the door, but stopped and turned to look at him one last time. The figure would always be engraved in my mind. Seeing those soft eyes, that sweet smile, the lips I’d kissed so many times, yet not enough.

“I love you!” I called to him through my tears.

“I love you too yebo! This isn’t goodbye. I’ll just see you later!” he called back. I could see the tears b in his eyes.

“See you later,” I smiled, and that was the last I saw of my sweet, beautiful Taemin before I turned and walked into the tunnel to the plane. I was on my own again, but this time I had something to work for. Taemin was waiting, and I couldn’t let him down.

 

 

 

Annyeong! Sorry for the short chapter:P We are to the goodbyes now, and since this one was very short I think I'll post another too!^.^ By the way for those who are wondering there will be a sequal! I was about half way through this story when I mentally decided "Yup; definitely gonna have to make a sequal to this. I've actually already started it (I wrote 16 chapters this weekend. Who needs a social life ne? Eh writing makes me more happy than being with friends. I know; seemingly antisocial, but you fellow writers know what I mean;D) Anyway, I will be releasing a teaser for the sequal either will this story's follow up chapter or as a seperate "chapter'.... haven't decided yet. 

I want to thank you all again sooooooo much for all the love and support you guys have shown me through your comments and subscriptions. It all means so much more to me than you know.<3 (Hoping to someday write teen books on a large scale and have a series. *Dreams*) Anyway, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart. I love you guys, and hope you will support and love the sequal just as much. *HINT* LOTS of new characters and twists in the second story! I'm so excited to start sharing it with you, though I'm going to wait a week or two after this one is finished to give you guys (along with myself) a break. I don't think I'll be able to wait any longer than that though xD Saranghae and kamsahmnida!!!!!<3  

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Just letting those of you who are wondering that YES there WILL be a sequal to this story^.^ I am in the process of writing it right now!

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EHhyung
#1
Really nice story and I really love it so much
sinebright1095 #2
I love it :)
writerinprogress94
#3
Chapter 6: Second review of the day! Let's do this! Chapters 3-6, woo! (And this is why I shouldn't have caffine...)
I don't think I caught any spelling or grammar errors in the last 4 chapters. There might have been a few places where the wrong punctuation sign was used, but other than that, 9.5/10 on grammar and spelling.
I feel like there wasn't as much description in the last four chapters, but there was definately more dialogue so it balanced out. 8.5/10 on word choice.
Your sentence structure was still a bit choppy in places, but your transitions were flawless. You moved very smoothly from one chapter or POV to another. 9/10 on sentence structure and transitions.
The characters are filling out very nicely! 9/10
Continuation value?
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... 80/100 :D
Now on to the next chapter!
writerinprogress94
#4
Chapter 2: seem a bit choppy. Maybe if they were combined...? Your transitions between ideas, paragraphs, and POVs were all "Sipjeom Manjeome Sipjeom!(10 out of 10)" Yay for 2PM reference :D
Dear lord, I've had to split this into 2 comments XP Me and my rambling...
Point #4~ Charcters! Any writer who's tried to write several OC's at once can appreciate the difficulty of having to give them each their own unique persona without making them a Mary-Sue. Even though by chapter two I've only seen your OC's a bit, they're all distinguishable from each other. I also think you're doing great on SHINee's POV's, too!
Final point~ Continuation value? (I believe I made up this phrase, but feel free to use it as long as you credit me XD)
In many longer stories, if by around the 5th to 10th I'm not enjoying it or interested for whatever reason, I'll stop reading. Your story, by chapter 2, is already at a 70/100 (which can drop or go up. I can already tell, though, that it'll be at least a 90/100 by the end!)
That's all until my next review! If these long reviews bother you, tell me and I'll shorten them :3
writerinprogress94
#5
Chapter 2: Even though the story is already completed, I'm still going to comment every few chapters. As an author I know how helpful feedback is!
First off, I don't think I caught any grammar or spelling mistakes in the last 2 chapters except for in Minho's POV in Chapter 1. You typed "Ewe, in a public restroom?" for Key's dialogue. "Ewe", spelled E-W-E, is a female sheep. Suggestions for the future or if you want to change it~ "Gross", "Nasty", "Disgusting", or simply "Ew"(sorry if I come across as a know-it-all, I don't try to XD). The only questionable thing is in the first sentence of Onew's POV in Chapter 2 you put "Her drooling words". Obviously I'm not all-knowing (who is, right?) so just because I don't know what that means doesn't mean it's wrong. Do you mean she's actually drooling? Could you clarify? I might want to use that word/phrase in the future, but I'd want to use it correctly! :3
Okay, now to the second point! Your word choice, which I mean by everything like your descriptions/imagery (like how the mansion was described during Key's POV in Captper 1; I don't know about you but writing the detailed descriptions is always the most tedious part of writing the story for me, so I applaud you! :D) to using words other than "said" for dialogue (one of my biggest fanfic pet peeves is when I find a story that has an amazing foreward, then I go to the first chapter and the whole thing is in "'Blah blah blah' said ___" format. Therefore, I really appreciate how you used things like *checks story quickly* "smiled"/"laughed"/"carried on"/etc.) That's really all I have to say on this point.
Point #3~ Sentence structure and segways/transitions between sentences and POVs! Over all in these first two chapters I'd give the sentence structure an 8.5/10. Some of the sentences just seemed a bit choppy. Like in Carolyn's POV in chapter 2 she says/thinks "Most people would've called it gay. I found it utterly attractive." The way they are now at the end of the paragraph they just
writerinprogress94
#6
I can't wait to read this! I listened to the piano cover while I read the opening and I swear I could actually see the whole thing! I can't wait to finish this story and head over to the sequel!
KhKheiselle0901 #7
Chapter 135: Welcome XD :D i just love this story..
EvrydayIsaShiningDay #8
Chapter 135: okay can i just say i was really confused when i saw that this was updates. xD same goes for the sequal. xD
danlyy
#9
That closure is so sad for minho...I suspect its Brianna who's become a black and red girl:/
CookieDookie #10
Ooh sequel :D
Can't wait ~