Teach Me to Love You

A Fangirl's Dream

*Nicole’s POV*

“Minho?” I called softly, but he didn’t wake up. “Minho?” I called again, getting a little impatient. “Get up you lazy frog!” I finally yelled. But he just rolled over in his sleep.

I swear this boy…

I began to crawl into bed next to him when, FINALLY, he woke up.

“Woah, what are you doing yebo?” he asked,

“Finally! I just wanted to wake you up and tell you…” I began to climb out of the bed, but he stopped me.

“No, stay,” he said in a tone that screamed I’m-Smiling-Like-A-Sleepy-Idiot.

I was thankful that the darkness hid my blushing face as I crawled into bed next to him. “Minho, I… gosh this is hard for me! I just wanted to say… I’m sorry for yelling at you today.”

He sat up in bed, seaming slightly shocked. “You don’t have to apologize-,”

“But I want to. I want this to be a happy, nice relationship. I don’t want to be the snobby girlfriend. I want you to know I love you and I didn’t mean anything I called you.”

I could see his smile through the darkness. “I love you so much yebo.”

I scooted closer and laid my head on his lap. He began playing with my long, dark curls. “I love you too, Minho.”

*Brianna’s POV*

“You stupid, idiot diva,” I mumbled as I brushed the damp hair out of Key’s face and placed a new cooled cloth on his forehead. “You’re so crazy and irrational.”

I sat back and stared at him for a minute. His angelic face looked beautiful in the dim light. It was so soft and smooth. I brushed my hand over his cheek before leaning down to kiss it. “But I still love you; I always will.”

I stayed up all night taking care of Key. The sun was just peaking over the hills when I leaned back in my chair to rest. I had a fight with the sleep tugging at my eyes, but it eventually won. I fell asleep in a chair by his bedside, holding his hand in mine and whispering how completely in love I was.

*Jonghyun’s POV*

*Earlier that night*

Something was different about Annie tonight. She didn’t seem tough and self-confident. In fact, she looked weak and sad.

“Annie, are you okay?” I asked as she fluffed the pillows on her bed.

“What? Yeah… yeah I’m fine…” she said distantly. She stopped fluffing the pillow and just stood there staring at nothing.

I was getting really worried now. I walked over to her and placed a hand on her shoulder.

“Annie?” She snapped back to life at my touch, but it wasn’t anything I expected.

“Oh Jjong!” she cried as she threw her arms around me. “I messed up. I messed up so bad. It was three years ago. I thought I could fix things. But then I saw him again and something came over me… I don’t know what’s wrong with me! I thought he was gone. I don’t ever want to see him again. You’re such a good person. I want to love you and give you my heart, but I can’t if someone else already has it,” she sobbed through her tears. She was clinging so tight to me that I thought she’d leave imprints!

I put my arms around her and held her close, rocking us back and forth. I had no idea what she was talking about, but I hated seeing her like this. “Annie, who is it? What did you do? What did HE do to YOU?” Her answer was the last thing I was expecting.

“I-i-i-it’s Key,” she squeaked.

“KEY?!”

We sat down on the bed and she (after calming down) told me the whole story. She said how she went to her sister’s college party and saw Key there. He looked so attractive and she made him drunk and did a bad thing with him. She thought it was over, but then he came back and she couldn’t control herself. There was something about Key that drove her crazy. She hated him for it. She told me that she made a move on him tonight. It was like a dagger in my heart, but I still listened closely to the story.

“I… I don’t want to feel like this toward him anymore, Jjong. I am sick of him. I hate him but I don’t know why I just…” she began to cry again. I scooted closer to her on the bed and wrapped my arms around her. We rocked back and forth again as I whispered comforting things in her ear.

Key is doing this to her. I don’t understand quite what he’s doing, but he needs to stop, and he will. I will make sure of it.

“Jonghyun…” she whispered pulling away.

“What is it?” I softly rested a hand on her cheek.

“I want to love you. Teach me how to love you.”

“I don’t know if that’s something I can teach…” I answered, brushing the hair out of her face.

“Just help me forget about Key. I feel like I’m trapped and-,”

I kissed her. I just flat out kissed her. I couldn’t take seeing her like this anymore. I wanted to get her out of this misery; show her how much love I could give her. So I finally just kissed her.

*Annie’s POV*

Each second of our kiss was like a little more of Key being erased from my mind. I put a hand on the back of Jonghyun’s head to make our kiss deeper. A tear rolled down my cheek. I saw all the images of Key, right before they burned away in my mind. I felt like each memory of Key was disappearing, one by one. I put my other hand up to his face, so that I was cupping it in my hands now.

Jjong wrapped his arms around me, pressing against my back to hold me close to him. He pushed me back so I was lying down on the bed, moving with me so as not to break our kiss. He was kneeling over me now. More tears rolled down my cheeks, bringing a salty taste into our kiss.

Things began to slow down. Our kisses grew more sweet and gentle. He played with my hair and gave me little kisses all over my face.

“Jjong,” I whispered.

“Yes?” he answered between butterfly kisses.

“Thank you.”

“For what?”

“For helping me forget.” He pulled away and looked directly into my eyes as I spoke. “And, for showing me that there’s more than just one person for me out there.” I gently brushed my hand down his cheek, looking up at his smiling face.

“Annie, Key was only the beginning. There are so many people in the world that would love to make you their own. People who want to give all their love and time to you. People like me,” he finished in a soft voice, gently kissing my bottom lip.  

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Just letting those of you who are wondering that YES there WILL be a sequal to this story^.^ I am in the process of writing it right now!

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EHhyung
#1
Really nice story and I really love it so much
sinebright1095 #2
I love it :)
writerinprogress94
#3
Chapter 6: Second review of the day! Let's do this! Chapters 3-6, woo! (And this is why I shouldn't have caffine...)
I don't think I caught any spelling or grammar errors in the last 4 chapters. There might have been a few places where the wrong punctuation sign was used, but other than that, 9.5/10 on grammar and spelling.
I feel like there wasn't as much description in the last four chapters, but there was definately more dialogue so it balanced out. 8.5/10 on word choice.
Your sentence structure was still a bit choppy in places, but your transitions were flawless. You moved very smoothly from one chapter or POV to another. 9/10 on sentence structure and transitions.
The characters are filling out very nicely! 9/10
Continuation value?
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... 80/100 :D
Now on to the next chapter!
writerinprogress94
#4
Chapter 2: seem a bit choppy. Maybe if they were combined...? Your transitions between ideas, paragraphs, and POVs were all "Sipjeom Manjeome Sipjeom!(10 out of 10)" Yay for 2PM reference :D
Dear lord, I've had to split this into 2 comments XP Me and my rambling...
Point #4~ Charcters! Any writer who's tried to write several OC's at once can appreciate the difficulty of having to give them each their own unique persona without making them a Mary-Sue. Even though by chapter two I've only seen your OC's a bit, they're all distinguishable from each other. I also think you're doing great on SHINee's POV's, too!
Final point~ Continuation value? (I believe I made up this phrase, but feel free to use it as long as you credit me XD)
In many longer stories, if by around the 5th to 10th I'm not enjoying it or interested for whatever reason, I'll stop reading. Your story, by chapter 2, is already at a 70/100 (which can drop or go up. I can already tell, though, that it'll be at least a 90/100 by the end!)
That's all until my next review! If these long reviews bother you, tell me and I'll shorten them :3
writerinprogress94
#5
Chapter 2: Even though the story is already completed, I'm still going to comment every few chapters. As an author I know how helpful feedback is!
First off, I don't think I caught any grammar or spelling mistakes in the last 2 chapters except for in Minho's POV in Chapter 1. You typed "Ewe, in a public restroom?" for Key's dialogue. "Ewe", spelled E-W-E, is a female sheep. Suggestions for the future or if you want to change it~ "Gross", "Nasty", "Disgusting", or simply "Ew"(sorry if I come across as a know-it-all, I don't try to XD). The only questionable thing is in the first sentence of Onew's POV in Chapter 2 you put "Her drooling words". Obviously I'm not all-knowing (who is, right?) so just because I don't know what that means doesn't mean it's wrong. Do you mean she's actually drooling? Could you clarify? I might want to use that word/phrase in the future, but I'd want to use it correctly! :3
Okay, now to the second point! Your word choice, which I mean by everything like your descriptions/imagery (like how the mansion was described during Key's POV in Captper 1; I don't know about you but writing the detailed descriptions is always the most tedious part of writing the story for me, so I applaud you! :D) to using words other than "said" for dialogue (one of my biggest fanfic pet peeves is when I find a story that has an amazing foreward, then I go to the first chapter and the whole thing is in "'Blah blah blah' said ___" format. Therefore, I really appreciate how you used things like *checks story quickly* "smiled"/"laughed"/"carried on"/etc.) That's really all I have to say on this point.
Point #3~ Sentence structure and segways/transitions between sentences and POVs! Over all in these first two chapters I'd give the sentence structure an 8.5/10. Some of the sentences just seemed a bit choppy. Like in Carolyn's POV in chapter 2 she says/thinks "Most people would've called it gay. I found it utterly attractive." The way they are now at the end of the paragraph they just
writerinprogress94
#6
I can't wait to read this! I listened to the piano cover while I read the opening and I swear I could actually see the whole thing! I can't wait to finish this story and head over to the sequel!
KhKheiselle0901 #7
Chapter 135: Welcome XD :D i just love this story..
EvrydayIsaShiningDay #8
Chapter 135: okay can i just say i was really confused when i saw that this was updates. xD same goes for the sequal. xD
danlyy
#9
That closure is so sad for minho...I suspect its Brianna who's become a black and red girl:/
CookieDookie #10
Ooh sequel :D
Can't wait ~