Flaming Hearts

5 White Girls and 5 Asian Boys (A SHINee SuJu story)

Melissa's Point of View

Why those little brats! I'm the oldest, they should respect me! I don't want us to lose this chance. To them it's just one big game. I walked around trying to find them, we had fifteen minutes until the meeting! Then Oona came running around the corner.

"I just say my watch! Where are the others, we're going to be late!"

I grabbed her arm. "Calm down, and stop running. Just because your the baby doesn't mean you get to act like one!"

"Mel-unni, I'm sorry. I just got caught up and didn't see my watch until-"

"Is everything okay over here?" Someone asked.

Oona and I looked up. Once my eye's connected with his I couldn't breath.

"Y-yeah, w-we were just..." I tried to speak.

Minho... he was even more hypnotizing in real life. Oona looked between the two of us as we watched each other. I felt her arms slip out of my hand and she walked behind me, but I didn't care anymore.

"I'll see you at the meeting, Melissa-unni." And she ran to the stairs.

"I-I'm,"

"Melissa?" He asked. Darn you, Oona!

"Uh-huh." I shook a my head slightly. "I'm part of the new band." I held my hand out to shake.

Minho chuckled and shook my hand.

"I'm Choi Minho." He said, his eyes barreling holes into me.

"I know, I'm a fan of SHINee." Oh God, he's going to think I'm a total fan girl! Keep it cool, keep it cool. I can't keep my fingers...

"It's great to meet you, guess I'll be seeing you around here alot." I felt me cheeks getting warm.

"MmmHmm." Minho smiled. Oh no... I'm fangirling!

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ashleynr #1
Chapter 91: Wow I read your story in three days. Loved It.
fanboygasm
#2
Not a reader sorry :/ but I do want to say don't let anyone bully you or make you feel bad about your writing. It may not be a piece of art or a masterpiece but the fact is, you took time to write it. You put effort into this. You put your heart and your work online, which is probably more than what most of the rude and uneeded commenters can say about themselves.

Writing is a process and a skill that is developed over time. Great writers didn't become great over night. So I hope you don't let rude, mannerless keyboard warriors hiding in the anonymity of the internet, callously cutting people down without even stopping to think of the effect they're having on someone.

Stay strong! Don't let anyone hold you down! Aja aja hwaiting!
MintyPetals
#3
This is a legitimate story right
Youshuffle600
#4
Chapter 91: uh.... o_O
asianfanfic____ brought me here! XD
K_I_M_C_H_I
#5
.....I'm not sure whether to take this story seriously or not...
dayana92 #6
i love this story...pls post the next chapter :)
xyerenade_14 #7
love all the photos,,,it gives me some laugh...same with the chapter...^_^<br />
xyerenade_14 #8
well im back again to read!!!!:D well i didn't read your last updates last time 'coz of the weather...aish and wish there's no more storm coming in our country...^^<br />
xyerenade_14 #9
nice work...:D <br />