ONEW CONDITION

5 White Girls and 5 Asian Boys (A SHINee SuJu story)

Oona's Point of View:

Onew had invited me to hang out with him and a few members of Super Junior. They lived the floor above the girls and I. There wasn't much to do, and it would be really cool to get to know them. Once we got there, only a few members were there. Donghae was sitting on the couch and waved when we entered.

"So that's the new maknae?" He nodded towards me.

"Yeah, guys, this is Oona." Onew said as he sat down. I sat next to him.

"Hey, Kyuhyun." Donghae called over Kyuhyun. "Where's the food?"

"I just ordered it, Prince Hae." Kyuhyun said sarcastically.

"You guys behave." Siwon scolded. "Don't mind them."

"It's okay, I'm used to it. I have three brothers." I replied.

After we all hung out for a while the food Kyuhyun ordered was here. Kibum brought it in and Onews eyes got wide.

"I smell chicken." He said as if in a transe.

Kibum rolled his eyes as he set it all on the coffee table. We all started eating and laughing until we noticed Onew was just staring at the chicken.

"Onew?" Siwon asked.

And Onew started to devour the chicken. Everyone was laughing, including Onew after he realized why it was funny. Soon the chicken was gone, thanks to Onew, and his face was covered in crumbs from thre breading. Donghae started making a joke when we all were stopped by Onew.

"Oh! I have one!" SuJu seemed destressed by Onew's offering of a joke. "Why didn't the chicken cross the road?"

"Why?" Kyuhyun asked reluctantly.

"Because I ate it!" He smiled proudly.

Everyone groaned as I giggled a little.

"Don't encourage him." Donghae said. "Last time someone laughed at his jokes he went on for an hour."

"Does anyone have a towel?" Onew asked. His face still a mess from eating so much chicken.

Kibum threw a towel at Onew and it stuck to his face.

"What ever he does it's Onew condition!" We all said.


Boo! So that was the lame chapter for Onew and Oona on thier day off. I mean, it was very silly. Hey, did you guys know that Onew Condition is in the Urban Dictionary? Here's the link, it is super rawesome: http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Onew%20Condition
And here's for sticking with us

And this is for the Onew fans
yes Onew approves this message.

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ashleynr #1
Chapter 91: Wow I read your story in three days. Loved It.
fanboygasm
#2
Not a reader sorry :/ but I do want to say don't let anyone bully you or make you feel bad about your writing. It may not be a piece of art or a masterpiece but the fact is, you took time to write it. You put effort into this. You put your heart and your work online, which is probably more than what most of the rude and uneeded commenters can say about themselves.

Writing is a process and a skill that is developed over time. Great writers didn't become great over night. So I hope you don't let rude, mannerless keyboard warriors hiding in the anonymity of the internet, callously cutting people down without even stopping to think of the effect they're having on someone.

Stay strong! Don't let anyone hold you down! Aja aja hwaiting!
MintyPetals
#3
This is a legitimate story right
Youshuffle600
#4
Chapter 91: uh.... o_O
asianfanfic____ brought me here! XD
K_I_M_C_H_I
#5
.....I'm not sure whether to take this story seriously or not...
dayana92 #6
i love this story...pls post the next chapter :)
xyerenade_14 #7
love all the photos,,,it gives me some laugh...same with the chapter...^_^<br />
xyerenade_14 #8
well im back again to read!!!!:D well i didn't read your last updates last time 'coz of the weather...aish and wish there's no more storm coming in our country...^^<br />
xyerenade_14 #9
nice work...:D <br />