Fashion!

5 White Girls and 5 Asian Boys (A SHINee SuJu story)

After Melissa broke up Kaitlyn and I's argument about Taemin liking her (which he totally does), me and Key headed to the mall. It felt nice to get a day off. But I think I know why Kaitlyn is mostly sad, because I am too. Homesick. All of us are. It's been the longest we've been with out seeing any of our family.

"Are you okay?" Key asked as I browsed a rack of clothing.

"Yeah..." I trailed off, thinking about my brothers and sisters.

"Are you sure?"

"Of course I am." I looked up at him with a fake smile plastered on my face.

Key frowned, seeing through my facade. Finally I let the smile go and sighed. Suddenly Key lit up and ran off. Maybe he realized that... oh God!

"Smile!" He said as he came back in a fuzzy florescent green jump suit with a springy headband.

I started laughing so hard as people snapped pictures with their camera phones. Soon Key waddled (on purpose) back to the changing room and came back in his regular clothes. My face was red from laughing as I caught my breath.


Key and I ate ice cream as he asked me again what was wrong.

"I miss my family... usually during the summer I visit my dad. He lives across the country with my step mom." I took another bite, trying to hold the tears back as I thought about my siblings. "One of my old teachers used to call us the Brady Bunch. Before me, my dad had my Unni, and then my baby sister after me. Now there's my baby brother and step siblings."

"You're all really close?" I nodded.

"My youngest sister and I are really close. She's a real country girl, and I'm a real city girl, but some how we get along."

"How old are your brothers?"

"Hunter is 14, and Vance is 2." Vance... I missed him the most. That was when I finally let a tear fall down. I loved Vance the most because he was the youngest, he always looked up to me. Was this the way the guys felt with Taemin?


Herro! So that was really lame but my brains frazzeled right now because it's so late and my effed up family just left from visiting today. I promise after a good nights sleep it will be so much better.

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ashleynr #1
Chapter 91: Wow I read your story in three days. Loved It.
fanboygasm
#2
Not a reader sorry :/ but I do want to say don't let anyone bully you or make you feel bad about your writing. It may not be a piece of art or a masterpiece but the fact is, you took time to write it. You put effort into this. You put your heart and your work online, which is probably more than what most of the rude and uneeded commenters can say about themselves.

Writing is a process and a skill that is developed over time. Great writers didn't become great over night. So I hope you don't let rude, mannerless keyboard warriors hiding in the anonymity of the internet, callously cutting people down without even stopping to think of the effect they're having on someone.

Stay strong! Don't let anyone hold you down! Aja aja hwaiting!
MintyPetals
#3
This is a legitimate story right
Youshuffle600
#4
Chapter 91: uh.... o_O
asianfanfic____ brought me here! XD
K_I_M_C_H_I
#5
.....I'm not sure whether to take this story seriously or not...
dayana92 #6
i love this story...pls post the next chapter :)
xyerenade_14 #7
love all the photos,,,it gives me some laugh...same with the chapter...^_^<br />
xyerenade_14 #8
well im back again to read!!!!:D well i didn't read your last updates last time 'coz of the weather...aish and wish there's no more storm coming in our country...^^<br />
xyerenade_14 #9
nice work...:D <br />