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5 White Girls and 5 Asian Boys (A SHINee SuJu story)

Melissa's Point of View:

I waited outside of the coffee shop for a bit before I saw Minho walking towards me. He waved and I waved back. Doki-doki. Why does my heart keep doing that? We sat and Minho ordered our coffee.

"First day off, the schedule's fun isn't it?" He asked as we received our coffee

"Ha ha, yeah. Loads." I said sarcastically.

Minho laughed. I felt my heart go doki-doki again. (Doki-Doki: like skipping a beat) Minho took a sip of his coffee and I giggled.

"What?" He asked.

"You have a cream mustache." Minho gave me a confused look and then realized I was right. He wiped the cream off of his upper lip and laughed with me.


After coffee we walked around Seoul. It was amazing, we've been here almost two months and I still couldn't believe it. I pinched my forearm to make sure I really wasn't dreaming. Nope, wide awake. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Minho looking at me. I turned my head towards him and smile.

"What is it?" I asked.

Minho motioned to the basketball court we were walking next to. I laughed. The other day I told him about how I was captain of my schools basketball team and could beat him any day. He had laughed and said that wasn't possible. We walked onto the court and Minho picked up the ball that was by the hoop.

"One on one?" He asked.

"Are you sure you want to challenge me?"

"Yeh." And then I snatched the ball away from him and threw the the ball into the hoop.

Maybe an hour later we were tied. We decided the next hoop would determine the winner. I dribbled the ball and jumped to shoot when he grabbed me around the waist and pulled me back down. Quickly I threw the ball and it went through.

"Ha!" I said.

Wow, I was actually acting a little immature. It was kind of fun. We laughed as we started walking again. The sound of thunder rattled the city as rain began pouring down. Minho pulled me under an awning and waved for a taxi. The taxi took us back to the dorms and I check my watch. It was already six in the afternoon. I wish this day didn't have to end.

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ashleynr #1
Chapter 91: Wow I read your story in three days. Loved It.
fanboygasm
#2
Not a reader sorry :/ but I do want to say don't let anyone bully you or make you feel bad about your writing. It may not be a piece of art or a masterpiece but the fact is, you took time to write it. You put effort into this. You put your heart and your work online, which is probably more than what most of the rude and uneeded commenters can say about themselves.

Writing is a process and a skill that is developed over time. Great writers didn't become great over night. So I hope you don't let rude, mannerless keyboard warriors hiding in the anonymity of the internet, callously cutting people down without even stopping to think of the effect they're having on someone.

Stay strong! Don't let anyone hold you down! Aja aja hwaiting!
MintyPetals
#3
This is a legitimate story right
Youshuffle600
#4
Chapter 91: uh.... o_O
asianfanfic____ brought me here! XD
K_I_M_C_H_I
#5
.....I'm not sure whether to take this story seriously or not...
dayana92 #6
i love this story...pls post the next chapter :)
xyerenade_14 #7
love all the photos,,,it gives me some laugh...same with the chapter...^_^<br />
xyerenade_14 #8
well im back again to read!!!!:D well i didn't read your last updates last time 'coz of the weather...aish and wish there's no more storm coming in our country...^^<br />
xyerenade_14 #9
nice work...:D <br />