Tell Me Goodbye

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What would happen to your life if you owed the Mafia leader money and time was running out?
What would you do if your ex-best friend who is now your boss won't let you love?
what happens when all is gone and you have nothing else left? What would you do if you were in their situations?

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TRAILER:

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Kwon, Jiyong(G-Dragon) had this perfect life, with this perfect girl. He had the house and the money and cars. He had the voice and the dance moves. But one day the love of his life was taken away from him by the notorious mafia leader Choi, Seunghyun(T.O.P). T.O.P called him as soon as his guys (Kang, Daesung, & Kim, Hyung-jun) came in and took Park, Su-min away from G-Dragon. He teased G-Dragon in a way before threatening him and then hangs up. Not knowing what to do he grabs his liquor and start to drink, stumbling down the hallway and spilling it all over. it had been days since the kidnapping and his friend Dong, Young-Bae(Taeyang) comes and finds him like this, he was destined to help his bestfriend out. He couldn't stand to see him like this. So Taeyang goes to the towns Detective Lee, Seunghyun (Seungri) and tells him about it. he instantly goes to the crime scene and makes a plan of how to track down T.O.P and bring him down. Meanwhile as T.O.P has the girl he has Daesung watch over as he does his business. Daesung is really sweet to her and doesn’t want to hurt her but she uses his kindness over the top and tricks him to let her out to use the restroom she knocks Daesung out with his gun and makes a run for it. But T.O.P catches her and locks her back up. Then events happen from there.

 

Characters:
-Daesung, A young 20 year old boy, Seunghyun's (TOP) best friend from childhood. Loves Seunghyun's sister. Parents were killed when he was young and Seunghyun's family took him in and took care of him.

-Seunghyun (TOP), The 22 year old Mafia leader. Daesung's best friend from childhood. His family took Daesung in after his parents were killed in the middle of the night. Has a little sister named Haewon and has a girlfriend named Soojin.

-Jiyong, The 21 year old man who is married to Su-Min. He owed Seunghyun a lot of money. Su-Min was taken from him and tries to get her back with the help of his friends. He starts to fall for this girl named Mimi.

-Taeyang, The 21 year old man who is Jiyong's best friend. He is love with an underaged girl named Melody. He helps his friend Jiyong out as much as he can to get Su-Min back.

-Seungri, The 19 year old detective who is in love with a woman name Joo Chan. He helps Jiyong and the others get back Su-Min.

-CL, The 19 year old Mafia minion for Seunghyun. She was by Seunghyun when she was younger. She was taken in by Seunghyun's family at an unknown time. Her and Haewon start to become really good friends.

-Park Bom, The 26 year old woman who helps Jiyong and Taeyang get back Su-Min

 

Characters:

-Su-Min, The young woman who is married to Jiyong and was kidnapped by Seunghyun's Posse.

-Mimi, The woman who befriends Jiyong and Taeyang and helps them get back Su-Min. She falls in love with Jiyong.

-Haewon, Seunghyun's little sister. She is in love with Daesung but her brother, Seunghyun, forbids it.

-Joo Chan, A woman who is in love with Seungri, the detective.

-Melody Shin, The woman is in love with Taeyang.

-Soo-Jin, Seunghyun's girlfriend.

-Hyung-Jun, One of Seunghyun's minions. One of Daesung's good friends also one of Daesung's partner in crime.

-Mr. & Mrs. Kwon, Jiyong's parents.

 

TRAILER:

 

 

 

Foreword

[Jiyong's POV]

I want her back!
What part of that don't you understand!
Seunghyun! Why do you have to do this to me!
Why can't you just leave us alone!
I paid you your money and yet you still kidnapped Su-Min!
Please...I BEG of you to give her back to me!
I'll do anything you ask of me!

Please...
..

 

[Daesung's POV[

My life is just like the little boy's in the story book...
He was raised in the mafia after his parents were killed...
Just like...me...
I'm just like him...If everything in that book is true so far...
Then....Will the ending turn out true for me as well?
It can't...I have so much to do still! It can't end like this!

WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS!

 

[Seunghyun's POV]

I control thier lives....I say whats comes and goes.
I will give and then take away as I please.
If I don't like what they do or who they are...I will make thier life miserable...

But....Sometimes I just can't help but feel sympathy for 'him'
Daesung...?

I'm sorry...

Cheese_Ohmyx
There will be NO sequel as of now for this story.

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seoulsunshine
#1
Chapter 92: Interesting. ..subscribe and read it after final
BigBangAngel
#2
Chapter 95: This was a a great fic!
Sesshura #3
Chapter 95: please let there be a sequel i loved this story
babybubblevcrack
#4
finally reach the end until the sequel =")

I almost cry DX I think everything will end up tragically, but somehow, It turns. Glad to know there's happy ending X"3

The moment of the war, gaaah ;~~~; soooo saaaaaad gaaaaaah

I really happy to know Daesung and Haewon are back and so do Jiyong, even there's a suprise, that's fine, really out of what I predict.

overall, I really like this story <3
*speechless*
babybubblevcrack
#5
I just read until chap 66 and this story is really well-designed ><
The story flow slowly but sure and gaah I really easy to understand what they feel •u• Simple but detail, yep ^^

I think I'm gonna' know what will happen the next from reading about story that Daesung read, it really look like a spolier X3

I can't comment too much for now because I want to continue it first, this story is almost like a novel, ahahaha XD
hielooo #6
^__________^
lovis89 #7
T_T seunghyun is dead
but su-min and jiyong are back together
daesung & cl ran away thanks to youngbae stopping seungri from firing.
haewon and daesung are back
lovis89 #8
this is so depressing. TOP is dying.
daesung is badly wounded + coughing blood
sun mi crying
hae won crying
CL is hurt
Taeyang and seungri are yelling
Bom ...
lovis89 #9
IS SEUNGHYUN GONNA DIE???
OMG SU MIN PLEASE!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA REUNITE SU MIN & JIYONG!!!!!
lovis89 #10
PLEASE LET JIYONG FOUND SU MIN!!!!