This is what you get.

Tell Me Goodbye
A/n
here is another chapter.
:) made up character Choi, Haewon debut in here.
Credit to Gina33 for making her :D
look foward for the other 3 characters debuts made by:
_Mimi, Twinkie & JooChan. :)
Im still waiting to recieve more forms for the last made up character. :)

Enjoy and comment!

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Tell me goodbye
Chapter Seven
This is what you get.

[DAESUNG’S POV]

Seung-Hyun went up to me and pushed me down on the ground.
“get up. You worthless piece of crap!” He yelled.
I stood up and looked at him.
He punched me back down. I was now bleeding from my mouth and nose.
I looked at him and tried getting back up but he kicked me back down.
I coughed and stayed down there.

He bent down to my level and grabbed my hair.
“Why did you do it-” I cut him off.

“I don’t want to be in here anymore Seung-Hyun!” I yelled, the pain was so overwhelming.

He pulled my hair more and then threw me down on the ground and kicked me again.
“So is this how you want to repay my father!” he yelled at me.
“huh! Answer me!” He yelled again.

“then stop hitting me!!” I yelled as I tried to stand up but lost my balance and fell back down, Seung-Hyun grabbed me by my jacket and looked at me in the eyes.

“you’re so stupid.” He muttered and threw me down. He kicked me once, went over to the door and unlocked it, then opened it and walked out.

I just laid there on the floor,
I didn’t care how much I was bleeding, I just wanted to lay there, the pain was so how do I say this…Painful.
Thinking about what Seung-Hyun,
‘Is this how you repay my father!’
It just made me mad inside.

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[T.O.P’S POV]

That stupid, stupid, STUPID KID!
What was my father thinking when he took him in!
GOODNESS SAKES! I hate him sometimes!
See what you’ve done father, Look what you made me into!
But that’s okay…Because I like being like this.
I went to the big dinner room and sat down at the table.
At that point I was really frustrated, I stood up and started to throw thing everywhere and started bust mirrors and break glass stuff.

“Brother?” called out a voice to me, I stopped what I was doing and turned around.
It was my sister. Haewon.
“Brother…Is…Is everything okay?” She asked me.
I walked over to her and placed a hand on her shoulder.

“Haewon, everything…is fine. Just go back to your room okay” I said softly to her. Whenever she was around, I was calmed…Because she was my sibling, I had to take care of her.

“Brother…this doesn’t look fine” She said referring to the broken stuff everywhere.

“I…I just had a problem with one the guys again.” I said not smiling.

“was it Daesung…” She said looking at me.

I didn’t speak. “Please…just go to your room. I just want to be alone…okay” I said looking at her, but taking my hand off of her shoulder.

“Neh…” she said and walked off. After going a few steps she stopped walking and turned back to face me.
“What did you do to him.” She asked me.

I looked at her. “that’s none of your business” I muttered. “Seung-Hyun, did you beat him again” She asked, walking back over to me.

I looked at her.
“didn’t I just tell you to go back to your room” I said pointing in some crazy direction.

“No! I will not go back to my room! Where’s Daesung!” I yelled.
At that point I was pissed off now.
I walked over to her and raised my hand to slap her but Daesung limped over, leaving a trail of blood behind him.

“don’t touch her Seung-Hyun” he muttered.

I looked at Daesung. And slapped him instead.
“Brother!” Haewon yelled.

“Don’t touch him!” I yelled at her. “Go to your room!” I yelled looking at her.
She didn’t move.
“NOW!” I raised my voice even louder.
She got up and walked up stairs to her room.
I looked at Daesung.

“This is what you get.” I muttered looking at him.
“Don’t mess up again!” I yelled and walked away back to my office.

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[DAESUNG’S POV]

I stood there until Seung-Hyun left before I went upstairs to Haewon’s room. I knocked before I went in. She was sitting at her little desk with the mirror. I walked up to her.
She turned in her chair to face me.

“Daesung why-” I cut her off.

“don’t worry about it.” I said as I sat down on her bed.
She looked at me with worry. “But-” again I cut her off from talking.

“Haewon, don’t worry about it really.” I said again. I looked at her.
She tried smiling.
I wish their was something I could do to help her…

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seoulsunshine
#1
Chapter 92: Interesting. ..subscribe and read it after final
BigBangAngel
#2
Chapter 95: This was a a great fic!
Sesshura #3
Chapter 95: please let there be a sequel i loved this story
babybubblevcrack
#4
finally reach the end until the sequel =")

I almost cry DX I think everything will end up tragically, but somehow, It turns. Glad to know there's happy ending X"3

The moment of the war, gaaah ;~~~; soooo saaaaaad gaaaaaah

I really happy to know Daesung and Haewon are back and so do Jiyong, even there's a suprise, that's fine, really out of what I predict.

overall, I really like this story <3
*speechless*
babybubblevcrack
#5
I just read until chap 66 and this story is really well-designed ><
The story flow slowly but sure and gaah I really easy to understand what they feel •u• Simple but detail, yep ^^

I think I'm gonna' know what will happen the next from reading about story that Daesung read, it really look like a spolier X3

I can't comment too much for now because I want to continue it first, this story is almost like a novel, ahahaha XD
hielooo #6
^__________^
lovis89 #7
T_T seunghyun is dead
but su-min and jiyong are back together
daesung & cl ran away thanks to youngbae stopping seungri from firing.
haewon and daesung are back
lovis89 #8
this is so depressing. TOP is dying.
daesung is badly wounded + coughing blood
sun mi crying
hae won crying
CL is hurt
Taeyang and seungri are yelling
Bom ...
lovis89 #9
IS SEUNGHYUN GONNA DIE???
OMG SU MIN PLEASE!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA REUNITE SU MIN & JIYONG!!!!!
lovis89 #10
PLEASE LET JIYONG FOUND SU MIN!!!!