Ahri
Finished 1/12/2014

Let Me In
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/484742/let-me-in-angst-fluff-kyuwook-romance-sliceoflife

About: Kyuhyun(SUJU)+Ryeowook(SUJU), fluff, romance, sliceoflife, angst, orphans, adoption, seperation

Title: 4/5 While I like how your title is short and relates to the story, it's a bit too unoriginal. If I were to search this up, I would get a whole bunch of stories with the same name.

Foreword: 10/10 I like how you keep it neat and simple instead of including a character list, a thorough summary, etc.

Plot: 20/20 Perfect plot. I love everything; there was nothing wrong or out of place. Everything fits in perfectly, and the events come in orderly and neatly instead of randomly.

Characters: 19/20 I like how the characters acted in general, and they're very relatable, except for that one scene when Ryeowook is getting adopted. I kinda feel that Kyuhyun gave him away without thinking thoroughly enough. You should include some more conflicting emotions about him wanting to Ryeowook to stay and him wanting Ryeowook to live a better life.

Grammar and Spelling: 20/20 No mistakes whatsoever; there are no run-on sentences, mistypes, or tense changes. This is probably the first or second story I've reviewed that has perfect grammar and spelling.

Enjoyment: 5/5 In total, the story was a delight to read. The plot is written perfectly, the grammar and spelling are flawless, and the characters are realistic.

Structure: 5/5 Everything is neat and well-spaced, but you should make your chapter one name to 'Let Me In' instead of "Final". That is jsut my personal opinion though, but it makes the story more better-looking, per se.

Overall: 83/85=98 This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Everything has no mistake at all; it's almost like as soon as you finished your work, you looked over it or had someone else do it for you. I almost feel bad for taking two points off your total for those little things.

Reply: Hi thank you for reviewing both my stories and thank you for placing them on the recommendation list. I've already credited your story on one of the two stories. I'll credit the latest one (Let Me In) when I can use my laptop :)