Ahri
Finished 12/30/2013

Noodle Boy Next Door
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/614270/noodle-boy-next-door-comedy-fluff-infinite-myungsoo-myungyeol-romance-sungyeol

About: Myungsoo(Infinite)+Sungyeol(Infinite), oneshot, romance, fluff, comedy, crack, 

Title: 5/5 I love the simple title and how it relates completely to the story. It's showcases the comedic plot of the story without being too ridiculous.

Foreword: 10 /10 Short, simple, and perfect for the story. It gives away just the right information without exposing the whole story, and it is mistake-free.

Plot: 20/20 This is such an amazing and unique plot. I like how it takes them a while to admit their feelings instead of saying right away and then dragging the story out with boring events that are randomly thrown in. Although the cousin helping out thing is a bit cliché, the overall uniqueness of the plot overrides it.

Characters: 20/20 Since this is a crack fic, the characters can act however they want, even if they are too silly to be real, so your characters are pretty well characterized. I like how well you show the weirdness of Myungsoo without getting the readers annoyed at his antics.

Grammar and Spelling: 19/20 You don't have any big mistakes except for a few run-on sentences that are barely noticeable.

Enjoyment: 5/5 In total, I like the comedy and fluffiness of the story. The weirdness of Myungsoo really made me like him and feel a connection to him. You bring him out with vivid details.

Structure: 5/5 Everything is neat and evenly spaced.

Overall: 83/85= 99 This story has to be, hands down, the best crack fic I've ever read on AFF. You bring out the characters in vivid details and give the story a funny vibe. The only thing off if your tendency to use run-on sentences at times and your one mistype.

Reply: Oh my gosh this review is just amazing thank you so much *sobs* I can't really say much except thanks to Ahri for the quick review and I'm so happy right now! Erm, about the mistype where I wrote "realise" instead of "realize". That's not a mistype - I'm British so realise is correct in British English! I'm not trying to make excuses, honestly, it's one of the differences between British and US English. Run-off sentences is one thing I always miss when I'm proofreading, so I sort of expected that, but thank you. I'll have a quick look through to try and sort that out! Anyway, thank you so much! I'll credit you straight away! I'll definitely be using your shop again <3