9/22 (separate thread)

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Something swift and hard had hit her and now the only thing she could sense was the noise invading her ears. An old woman shrieked at the sight of the bloodied individual now lying limp on the hard concrete road. Another man came to the scene preventing the guilty driver from escaping the crime scene. Still another bystander was trying to console a child telling the kid not to look at the horrid scene she had just witnessed.

Everything was chaotic. Everything was blurry as she, lying helplessly in her own bed of blood, watched the group of people hovering over her body. There was pain, very excruciating that she had wished Death had closed in on her in one strike of its scythe, but no. She was to suffer the impact of metal on her skin. She had to feel all of it and endure the searing sensation that would later take her consciousness away.

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Whew! Finally managed to slip in an update here. :3 How's everyone? I'm not entirely back, but I'm going to update on my pace since I've been more than swamped for the past few months.

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 9: Thank you for making a prequel of Meeting the Jungs 😍 it was nice to read more about their relationship. ALSO KRYSTAL DHHDHJBDSKSI NOT HER ASKING THAT 😭
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#2
Chapter 8: I’m crying LOL “a soccer team of babies” 😅🤣
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#3
Chapter 7: I love the songs that you choose for noraebang hehe <3
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#4
Chapter 6: I love this prompt. Karaoke with besties is so wholesome.
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#5
Chapter 5: Aw this was cute <3 I liked their interactions and dialogues hehe
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#6
Chapter 4: Also, the image doesn't load for some reason? I have to open it in a new tab to see it, but I saw it, and I love that you chose that photo for the painting <3
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#7
Chapter 4: The quote by Picasso is perfect for setting the tone. Regrettably, I've never read it until now, so I'm glad I did. I might have to save that. I also ADORE this AU. It reminds me of "Portrait of Lady on Fire" (an amazing French movie. If you haven't seen it, I highly recommend it), but this story came first?? Wow, I love interactions between Jessica and Tiffany so much. I'll have to come back and reread this story. This was beautifully written.
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#8
Chapter 4: THIS MIGHT HAVE TO BE MY FAVORITE STORY IN THIS SERIES SO FAR OMGGGGG
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#9
Chapter 3: I need a pirate!snsd au right now...
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#10
Chapter 2: This is so sweet. Friends can be indeed our family too.