★— silentraven
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title: 5/5
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Honestly, if i could give u a 10 out of 5 i would. That is just an amazing title that fits the story.
foreword and description: 9/10
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You did a good job of summarizing the story, but you should put it at the beginning of the forward. Having it at the end doesn't make much sense. Also, i feel like Luhan is a major character in this story but you didn't have him in your character introductions.
appearance: 4/5
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You have a nice background and poster, but you should make the font just a *little* bigger. Well, it might just be that i'm blind. *shrug*
plot: 12/15
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So far... i don't see much of a plot forming. It seems like Yoona is going to grow up and somehow get with Donghae...
originality: 12/15
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I like the rebellion that's weaved into this story. The personalities you used for Yoona, Luhan and Kai were quite cliche.
grammar and spelling: 18/20
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You had a few typos, but other than that it's all good!
flow: 7/10
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It's a little slow for my taste. Usually by the 5th chapter there's some plot development, but i still can't really see where this story is going.
characterization: 9/10
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Even thought their personalities were cliche, your character's stayed pretty constant.
overall enjoyment: 9/10
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I enjoyed reading your story :)
total: 85/100
reviewer: dr3amer
reviewer's notes: Sorry for such the long wait. >.< thank you for choosing me as your reviewer!
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