★— mickeywithoutears
` ✼ exotic grounds — reviews gallery
title: 2/5
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it is too clichè.
foreword and description: 10/10
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interesting.
appearance: 5/5
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i like it :)
plot: 4/15
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I have seen many story of this plot.
originality: 3/15
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many fanfic I seen is quite similar.
grammar and spelling: 19/20
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good job.
flow: 2/10
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it is too fast, how can a stranger just let the OC to stay in his house , without knowing each other.
characterization: 8/10
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did quite well
overall enjoyment: 4/10
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total: 57/100
reviewer: moodchanyeol
moodchanyeol's note: I enjoyed your story:) , Try again you can do it !
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