★— ohainerdygirl
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title: 3/5
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I don't understand the title. But its interesting hehe.
foreword and description: 7/10
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Its very normal and I don't think there's anything special, but it still makes me want to read it.
appearance: 5/5
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iLove it! The fonts are used really good too (: The poster is not bad too.
plot: 12/15
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Common, but the way you write it, its different!
originality: 8/15
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Yeah.. A lot of stories have the same idea so.. yeah.
grammar and spelling: 13/20
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I caught some spelling errors.
You: back bone
Supposed: backbone
You: defintaly
Supposed: definitely
Some other mistakes,
You: Well I don't have a back bone, never knew how to develop one.
Supposed: Well, I don't have a backbone and I never knew how to develop one.
you: I looked away and smiled, truly smiled, which hasn't happen in a long time
Supposed: I looked away and smiled, truly smiled, which hasn't happened in a long time
You: Well you see our manager can careless.
Supposed: Well you see our manager can care less.
And I know, I'm always taking stuff out from the first to third chapter, because I think its the most important, as if the readers read it and see the mistakes, they might not want to read it anymore.
flow: 10/10
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characterization: 9/10
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Awesome characterization. Just that I don't really get Jongin's personality. One minute he's nice, and another minute he's fustrated and bleh.
overall enjoyment: 10/10
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I enjoyed it a lot. But I had to be sad at the parts where SooHye was bullied and those people sharing the dorm with her are such ______ but I love it XDD
total: 77/100
reviewer: babycorn
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