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HandsomePaul
Title: 3/5
The title was simple and short which was good, but it was not particularly eye-catching.
Foreword/Description: 9/10
This was kept simple and short too, which was also good. And you did not give too much away either which is good. It was neat, and the colors and fonts matched nicely.
Appearance: 5/5
I really liked all your posters. They were all very well made.
Plot: 13/15
Well done! You did a nice job of inserting humor into your story.
Originality: 12/15
The werewolf theme is not really original. There are many other stories about werewolves. But you did manage to make it stand out more to me than others.
Grammar/Spelling: 19/20
I only found a couple mistakes throughout your story. Keep up the good work.^^
Flow: 9/10
I thought at the beginning you went a bit fast, but after the first couple of chapters you slowed down and went at a better pace.
Characterization: 10/10
I simply LOVE Kai's character. He's so cute and funny.
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
I've never really been into supernatural stories, but this was an exception. You managed to draw me in.
Total: 88
reviewer: Onewluhan
notes: Great job on your story!^^ Everything was very nice.
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