「review」┋Nicsnsd
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Title: 1/5
It's not that appealing.
Foreword/Description: 5/10
You should request from a layout shop. And next time, don't ever forget to capitalize the initials of people's names!
Appearance: 2/5
There aren't any kind of graphics and the foreword is pretty messy too. But I give bonus points since my stories are pretty messed up too. xD
Plot: 12/15
I like it! But in Chapter 1, Tiffany (who lived in Korea) called Nicole (who lived in Singapore); which is an unrealistic scene because it'd cost a lot. She should've e-mailed Nicole instead.
Originality: 10/15
I have a feeling that there are stories similar to this one, but this is the first one I read.
Grammar/Spelling: 10/20
There are some grammar mistakes. And you shouldn't put a space behind a comma, dot, or any punctuation mark unless you're making some kind of masterlist or character chart.
Characterization: 7/10
I recommend you to use a character chart.
Flow: 9/10
Your story is really cute! But there are some dragging scenes.
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 64/100
——reviewed by SOOshified——
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