★— pukeslove
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title: 4/5
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I haven't encountered any story with this title, at all. But it sounds a bit... deadly.
foreword and description: 9/10
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Pretty good. Your layout was decent, but the beautiful, beautiful words cover it up.
appearance: 3/5
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I like your layout, but not that much. One more: Exotic Grounds makes awesome posters so why not request?
plot: 15/15
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I really like the plot! I love how Kris isn't like other grim reapers - the pale skeletal ones. ^^
originality: 11/15
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TBH, I've read a story similar to this one - where a person died and his soul switched with another person's. But you have some unique features in the story, though.
grammar and spelling: 15/20
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Don't ever put a space before a dot, as in:
"Hi I'm Do Kyungsoo ."
and
"I have a boyfriend named Park Chanyeol ."
"Hi I'm Do Kyungsoo ." should be:
"Hi, I'm Do Kyungsoo."
flow: 5/10
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I'd love to finish reading the chapter, but I didn't since it has dragging/boring scenes.
characterization: 10/10
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Pretty good. Just from a few words, I can imagine how they react towards each other already.
overall enjoyment: 7/10
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total: 82/100
reviewer: SOOshified
SOOshified's notes: I really like the plot! But I'm not sure if I should subscribe or not, hmm... /teasing
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