「review」┋ -layxing
` ✼ exotic grounds — reviews galleryTitle : 4/5
It's a great title, but if i saw it while i was looking for a new fanfic to read, it wouldn't catch my attention.
Foreword/Description : 9/10
It was a great forward that doesn't give the story away. It tells you enough about the characters to understand the story. Next time, instead of leaving a copyright notice, simply deactivate text selection.
Appearance : 5/5
You chose a really nice layout that fits the story
Plot :10/15
The story lacked a certain point that it was building up to, which made it slightly hard to read. I can understand that it was short, but the plot wasn't very interesting.
Originality : 15/15
all the way :) it's the first time i've read a fanfic with a someone being blind.
Grammar : 19/20
There were a few grammatical errors i picked up, but overall your grammar is great :)
Characterization : 8/10
As i said earlier, your idea with the blind characteristic was great but i felt like Chanhee's character that hated everyone was a bit rash.
Flow : 9/10
The events were put together quite nicely, but the ending was ab it abrupt.
Overall Enjoyment : 10/10
I normally don't enjoy fluff, but your writing was really nice and i enjoyed it. Thanks for writing this story! I hope you do well in your contest!
Total : 89/100
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