Title : 2/5

This kind of title I see it many time already .. But since your story is not complete I can't really tell if it suit your story.

Foreword and Description : 3/10

well you should not revealed too much information of your story when I read, the description it already give out your story.

Appearance : 5/5

I like it! But I think pink can do a better job.

Plot : 7/15

your plot is okay.

Originality : 4/15

well I read many time of this type of story already but is maid in love with master though .

Grammar and Spelling : 17/20

well it is quite okay can be improve.

Flow : 4/10

it is quite fast though but stil okay.

Characterization : 7/10 

well some minors I am really curious of the roles.

Overall Enjoyment : 3/10

I am quite sad on the first chapter since the main say SNSD are bunch of plastic dolls :( I am a sone, but the main character was so cool so I like it.

Total : 52/100

Reviewer's Notes: Sorry if I am harsh. Btw I am RilaCinaXy but I will be using this acc everytime.

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E.G.'s notes!

hi! i'm E.G.! i'm here to remind you of crediting the shop and the reviewer. i'll keep an eye on your stories! /mehrong

thanks for requesting! :)