「review」┋ heechan27
` ✼ exotic grounds — reviews galleryTitle : 1/5
There seems to be a typo(?) in your title. It should be "You're My Wife!" instead of 'your're'. I wouldn't have clicked on the story.
Foreword/Description : 7/10
There are a few grammar mistakes, but it was still understandable. Other than that, it was fine.
Appearance : 4/5
Plain, but I like the poster.
Plot : 13/15
Plot is interesting, though it lacks originality.
Originality : 9/15
Like I said, originality is lacked here. I have seen many contract love in AFF, and this isn't any different.
Grammar : 12/20
You might want to work on your grammar even though it is understandable. It isn't that bad though, you just need more practice! After all, practice makes perfect, right? *In Heechul's singing voice*
Characterization : 7/10
Characterization is good.
Flow : 9/10
The flow was neither too fast nor too slow.
Overall Enjoyment : 8/10
I really enjoyed reading this story, mainly because it is Eunhae, and the story is cute. Subscribed, and sorry for the late review.
Total : 70/100
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