「review」┋ heechan27

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  you're my wife! 
                   by heechan27

Title : 1/5

There seems to be a typo(?) in your title. It should be "You're My Wife!" instead of 'your're'. I wouldn't have clicked on the story.

Foreword/Description : 7/10

There are a few grammar mistakes, but it was still understandable. Other than that, it was fine.

Appearance : 4/5

Plain, but I like the poster.

Plot : 13/15

Plot is interesting, though it lacks originality.

Originality : 9/15

Like I said, originality is lacked here. I have seen many contract love in AFF, and this isn't any different.

Grammar : 12/20

You might want to work on your grammar even though it is understandable. It isn't that bad though, you just need more practice! After all, practice makes perfect, right? *In Heechul's singing voice*

Characterization : 7/10

Characterization is good.

Flow : 9/10

The flow was neither too fast nor too slow.

Overall Enjoyment : 8/10

I really enjoyed reading this story, mainly because it is Eunhae, and the story is cute. Subscribed, and sorry for the late review.

Total : 70/100

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​posted 12.12
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fishae
#1
Chapter 111: Thank you for the review! For the title, I've an explanation. I haven't gone to the middle of the story yet, and 'fidelity' has something to do with the main story. It's just the courting stage in the story. LOL. :)

It was a nice review though, so thank you! :D
rapunzhel
#2
Chapter 85: Thank you so much for the review! More power! :D
KimSeokjinwifey #3
Uhm, I'm just wondering when will be my review be done?
I've been waiting for so long...
mickeywithoutears
#4
Chapter 53: Hey! Erm, I was thinking about posting the reviews I've got in a new chapter after all the reviews comes out, but I couldn't copy and paste this >< Do you mind sending me a copy of this review?