★— leykai
` ✼ exotic grounds — reviews gallery
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foreword and description: 9/10
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It didn't tell too much, more or less. (Although it's for a contest so I don't know.)
appearance: 5/5
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It fit the theme well.
plot: 10/15
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It wouldn't have caught my attention.
originality: 11/15
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Although it was for a contest, I'd say you carried out the plot very well. But I wanted to know more about Luhan. More of his POV and why he likes Eunmi so much.
grammar and spelling: 20/20
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Didn't see any errors.
flow: 7/10
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Nice flow and, but as I said about the whole Luhan thing.
characterization: 8/10
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You did very well on the characters. Although I wanted to know more about them, but I guess you can't put that in a one-shot.
overall enjoyment: 9/10
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It wasn't really my type of story, but very good anyways.
total: 83/100
reviewer: rlab_exotic
reviewer's note: Hey~ Sorry if I wasn't the reviewer you wanted...
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