★— silentraven
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title: 2/5
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It's not that appealing.
foreword and description: 9/10
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It's neat, short, and snappy - yet descriptive. A thing that I don't like about your story is that there are too much put-a-sentence-here-and-end-it-with-dots thingy.
appearance: 5/5
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The layout, background, poster, I love everything!
plot: 13/15
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I like the plot. It's just... cliché.
originality: 8/15
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Like I said before, it's cliché.
grammar and spelling: 17/20
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There are some mistakes. I'll recap some from the first three chapters.
Original: “I don’t need you...” he muttered, taking a sip from his goblet-filled wine.
Instead, use this: "I don't need you," Baekhyun muttered as he took a sip of wine.
flow: 10/10
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One word: PERFECT. It's not too fast that I don't get what's happening and not too slow that I just want to stop reading. Keep it up! :)
characterization: 10/10
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I can imagine Krystal being a b**** like that and Baekhyun being a now-successful businessman. :)
overall enjoyment: 9/10
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total: 83/100
reviewer: sooshified
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