「review」┋Wallflower606*
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( Can't Hold Back Anymore )
Title: 1/5
It's not that appealing, and I'm sure that there are stories with the same name.
Foreword/Description: 5/10
Not that appealing either.
Appearance: 3/5
You should've put some character description on the foreword. But ignore it, I've found a story that gets an excellent review when it has no description. And the poster. You should've requested a poster instead of putting Key's picture as one.
Plot: 9/15
I like it! But it's kinda cliché.
Originality: 5/15
Your story is realistic, but I know that there are a lot of stories like this one.
Grammar/Spelling: 17/20
A few grammar mistakes. Please note that even a punctuation mark means A LOT to even a single word. "Its" is used to state ownership while "It's" is used to state something like "it's my house" or "it's an apple".
Characterization: 7/10
I recommend you to use a character chart.
Flow: 10/10
Love it <3
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 65/100
——reviewed by SOOshified——
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