「review」┋ CAP_Loves_Niel
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by CAP_Loves_Niel
Title: 3/5
The title's cute, but pretty clichè. It's not really that eye-catching.
Foreword/Description: 7/10
The description basically said it all. But it's good that you didn't really give away the whole flow of the story. I just found some mistakes. The first paragraph was kind of long and you should have separated it into two or even three sentences. It has too many thought for a sentence. I also found some errors in the use of punctuation marks.
Appearance: 4/5
The overall all appearance is okay. The story was easy to read since you stick with only one color. The picture's cute. :) Everything's neat, but too neat that it looks blank.
Plot: 13/15
I can say that you have a pretty good plot. It's my first time reading a fic of an animal's point of view. At first, I thought it's ridiculous - how can an animal tell a story? But you pulled it off. It's actually a good choice telling the story in the dog's pov.
Originality: 15/15
Very original. 'Nuff said.
Grammar: 18/20
I only found a couple of typos and a few incorrect usage of punctuation marks. You have no problem with your grammar, though. And again, if a sentence has three or more ideas, just split it up into two.
Characterization: 10/10
I love the characters, even the dog. You clearly portrayed them, and that's really good. Oh, and Key. XD It made me laugh when you gave him that character.
Flow: 10/10
The flow's just right, not too slow, not too fast.
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
I'm not really into , but I'll admit this one's really good. It's worth reading it. ^^
Total: 88/100
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reviewed by thederpchanyeol
posted 12.07
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