★— panda_and_llama
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title: 3/5
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I think you should have chosen a different title for this story, to be completely honest. What makes her so forbidden? I think that something other than forbidden would have worked as well.
foreword and description: 9/10
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Good, everything seems to be easy to read and still interesting to read. Very pretty.
appearance: 5/5
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It looks fine and easy to read. Very well done.
plot: 13/15
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Very peculiar if I have to say, but still very intriguing. Though, what is her objective? What is her goal? Just what exactly is her adventure? Those are the questions your must ask yourself before continuing to the next chapter, otherwise the story may be set off balance in the end.
originality: 14/15
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I've never really seen a story with an original character being the princess before, so this is very new to me. However, fairy tale EXO fics are very commonly seen in my eyes.
grammar and spelling: 19.5/20
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I CANNOT SAY THIS ENOUGH. I FREAKING LOVE YOUR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING. Ugh, it's so perfect and darling you must have edited this before you published it, no? It's absolutely perfect and the spelling is just spectacular. If only we had writers like this these days, ha ha. The word choice is so original and deeming to be very strong. Very good work, I admire it.
flow: 9/10
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It's very well paced, and I don't seem to have a problem with it except for one, I didn't particularly like how the scenes switched, but that's fine.
characterization: 8/10
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Very good, although I did see you to have some trouble portraying her as a kinder character who's more onto the sillier side than the stronger? I think that was just the point we needed to work on. Great work, nonetheless.
overall enjoyment: 9/10
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Ha ha, this was one of the original character fics that I actually liked. I'm not a big fan of original character fics but this was fine for me. I guess I still have mnixed feelings about this, but oh well. I think it's very entertaining. Great job, and I hope I wasn't too hard on you. I'm more of the strict people, and I hope to see you here next time!
total: 89.5/100
reviewer: raelin
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