★— silentmissterese02
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title: 5/5
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I like it ! Because the title was only ( White ) that makes me curious of the story.
foreword and description: 5/10
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I like the description, but not the foreword. The foreword you should put some talking parts of the story.
appearance: 5/5
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suits really well :)
plot: 7/15
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it is quite confusing for me but I understand better when at the end of the story and I found fantastic!
originality: 15/15
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I never read this kind of fanfic .
grammar and spelling: 17/20
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well they are fine but the full stops have some prob.
Solutions: should not keep putting full stop change it to comma instead.
Solutions: should not keep putting full stop change it to comma instead.
flow: 4/10
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it is too fast, how can when her girlfriend leave he imediately think of the man is with her girlfriend.
characterization: 10/10
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overall enjoyment: 4/10
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I really enjoyed this story :)
total: 72/100
reviewer: moodchanyeol
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